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29th Jul 2017 4:50pm
This is a dainty piece, and still has the Again's style. But I am not sure if "I sawed" should be "I saw". The last word with initial " f "shocked me a bit. It could be a very beautiful view if you use another word......
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
29th Jul 2017 5:02pm
I sawed! (stripped ) with my eyes... her with my eyes she did not rise no surprise I took her all over and snaps even closer three poems I will compose on her at the least the first one is my heartbeat stopped tonight ... THE F WORD I shall revoke later roseeeeeeeeeeejasmineeeeeeeeeeee thankeeeeeeeeeeeeee
29th Jul 2017 5:09pm
in erotica
no one would read
if
'''fucked'''
is relieved
so let it be
next three will be delicacies
lovely
her beauty
her charm
her long legs
her strip tease
for voyeurs like me many please
a kid unknowingly did
as many caught her and made a bid
will she com to me
and unknowingly she did
no one would read
if
'''fucked'''
is relieved
so let it be
next three will be delicacies
lovely
her beauty
her charm
her long legs
her strip tease
for voyeurs like me many please
a kid unknowingly did
as many caught her and made a bid
will she com to me
and unknowingly she did
30th Jul 2017 2:42am
