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Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
I feel lonely tears of a soul tonight
this darkened night without stars
crying moons tear drowns a flower
if only a dramatized heart could cry out loud
not hushed by a disguised happy voice
we could help those who hide sadness
many things in life never cross our minds
till a tragedy awakens our souls
dampens the smiles on our faces
when rain falls in flooding stages
I can't but wonder are Angel's crying
is God weeping over tears we can't see ~
~unknown tears that are cried deep within hearts~
Inspiration ~
Cherie ~ who's friends life was ended on earth :(
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
this darkened night without stars
crying moons tear drowns a flower
if only a dramatized heart could cry out loud
not hushed by a disguised happy voice
we could help those who hide sadness
many things in life never cross our minds
till a tragedy awakens our souls
dampens the smiles on our faces
when rain falls in flooding stages
I can't but wonder are Angel's crying
is God weeping over tears we can't see ~
~unknown tears that are cried deep within hearts~
Inspiration ~
Cherie ~ who's friends life was ended on earth :(
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
28th Jul 2017 3:05am
This is a very special poem you have written for Cherie and her departed friend.
"I can't but wonder are Angel's crying"
Of course they are crying consoling tears. I loved this sad, but beautifully write as I know your friend will.
"I can't but wonder are Angel's crying"
Of course they are crying consoling tears. I loved this sad, but beautifully write as I know your friend will.
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Re: Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
28th Jul 2017 4:25am
Hey Jerry........thank you my friend for such graceful words you've blessed me with.........I hope it brings some kind of comfort to her sadnened heart........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
28th Jul 2017 12:34pm
if only a dramatized heart could cry out loud
not hushed by a disguised happy voice
So many, for whatever reason, simply won't cry out for the help they need. That's a huge crux in our electronically disengaged society.
Another thought-provoking verse, Flowered-One. I'm sorry for your friend's loss. ❤
not hushed by a disguised happy voice
So many, for whatever reason, simply won't cry out for the help they need. That's a huge crux in our electronically disengaged society.
Another thought-provoking verse, Flowered-One. I'm sorry for your friend's loss. ❤
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Re: Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
29th Jul 2017 4:23am
Hey Ahavati........you're so right.......if only their hearts could vice what they feel deep within......we could help them.......very sad.......thank you for your kind heart and soul...,.,,purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
28th Jul 2017 1:08pm
Re: Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
29th Jul 2017 4:31am
Hey PS.........it is very sad........you think a soul is ok then they're gone.......thank you for your kind words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
28th Jul 2017 4:03pm
the beauty of sadness revealed in this poem :-)
1000 ehugs on their way :-)
1000 ehugs on their way :-)
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Re: Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
Hey David.........thank you for sharing beautiful words and all those warm hugs with me.....brings a smile in a sad time.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
28th Jul 2017 9:41pm
Re: Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
29th Jul 2017 4:42am
Hey Purple........I'm glad you to see your smile here........always comforting my purple friend........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
29th Jul 2017 9:05pm
A heartbreaking but beautiful write, Flower. Cherie has a fine and talented friend. My favorite lines:
many things in life never cross our minds
till a tragedy awakens our souls
dampens the smiles on our faces
Tragedy reminds us of what a brief candle life really is. Luved this!
many things in life never cross our minds
till a tragedy awakens our souls
dampens the smiles on our faces
Tragedy reminds us of what a brief candle life really is. Luved this!
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Re: Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
30th Jul 2017 3:48am
Hey Crow..........I always appreciate your praise and heart print you leave upon my ink........your candle words give me inspiration........thank you my friend........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
30th Jul 2017 7:19pm
beautiful thoughts
but o purple one
maintain your logo
ur the only one PURPLE IN DUP
ALL MUST KNOW
and your poetry must GLOW
let the world and wind blow!
but o purple one
maintain your logo
ur the only one PURPLE IN DUP
ALL MUST KNOW
and your poetry must GLOW
let the world and wind blow!
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Re: Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
1st Aug 2017 5:34am
Hey Again.....beautiful gifted words you leave me.......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
1st Aug 2017 6:23pm
i bow read mine sometimes some how purple galore will be glad if you swim across my floor but mostly exotaw
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Re: Re. Silenced Heart ~ To Cherie
6th Aug 2017 3:52am
Hey Bro........I have visited upon your page and let been with I read.......you're such a talent.......xo :)
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6th Aug 2017 4:12am