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I find this funny

Everything that's female
that walks past you
charm thee , like a snake
lure, for your own comfort
when a heart breaks
words seem to clash
but why are you so down?
here let me help you
but then again, i don't know you
but you'll take the offer anyway
until fresh bate comes again
i'm taken without words
so i warn all the ladies
not to fall into this trap
don't be taken for a joke
but maybe, it made me laugh too!

and so the cycle happens again...

Written by 666gothchick

(Paulina Dionne)

Published 4th Sep 2011 | Edited 25th Sep 2011

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lmao

Benji (Leah Johnson)

4th Sep 2011 4:15pm

fresh not freash and so what ur saying is i cant be friends with pople who like my poetry? Or do bitter memoires and feelings reside in the piece of onyx you so sadly call a heart? Maybe somebody needs to truly move on and think about all the mistakes shes made in her own life "Why point out the splinter in your brother's eye,and ignore the log in your own?" I would like to know so very bad why you continue to despise me. So we didnt work out,tough tittie said the kitty when the milk went dry. Try moving on and cutting out those bad feelings and remember the good ones. "Id only share my gum with my boyfriend and you" i do belive you once told me,love is a lost cause so forget it and burn it. See ya in hell darling