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Healing Hands
You have healing hands
I know what I need lies in your fingertips
If only you touched me exactly how I wanted
I'd never ask for anything more
Not even your love
Because I know that's not possible
But you prefer to break me
Not help me
I know
I know what I need lies in your fingertips
If only you touched me exactly how I wanted
I'd never ask for anything more
Not even your love
Because I know that's not possible
But you prefer to break me
Not help me
I know
Published 24th Jul 2017
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2017 11:32am
you are
just..
..yep running away with my little heart<3
just..
..yep running away with my little heart<3
25th Jul 2017 8:09pm
Anonymous
25th Jul 2017 11:42pm
:-D, youre so beautiful
27th Jul 2017 7:36am
15th Aug 2017 1:50am
"If only you touched me exactly how I wanted
I'd never ask for anything more"
Bravo! I feel these lines because I have been there but sometimes the words we say isn't what is heard. Keep on writing. You have a way with words.
I'd never ask for anything more"
Bravo! I feel these lines because I have been there but sometimes the words we say isn't what is heard. Keep on writing. You have a way with words.
15th Aug 2017 3:06am
Appreciate you saying so. I'm sorry you felt those lines because it's not a fun place to be. Thank you for your comment.
15th Aug 2017 3:11am
15th Aug 2017 3:18am
This is very true unfortunately. But there is comfort in knowing we are not alone.
21st Sep 2017 5:22am
Deep words! Sometimes the hands are quicker than the eye, and they can break more things than they can heal...
Sometimes with words and implements of poetic destruction... They also can write of love that heals hearts and souls.
JJ
Sometimes with words and implements of poetic destruction... They also can write of love that heals hearts and souls.
JJ
Yeah. Rough hands that don't want to be shown tenderness are dangerous for broken skin because there is no desire in their fingers to fix the broken. Hands that speak love through soft touches are those that heal and want to heal. If only we all touched one another with tenderness...
Thank you for your comment and thoughts.
Thank you for your comment and thoughts.
