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Evening wine

Blush clouds swirl and float
Sun drips heavy like honey,
Sipping in the sky

Written by jemac

Published 23rd Jul 2017

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Re. Evening wine

23rd Jul 2017 2:52am

A nice glass to go with the night.

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Re. Evening wine

23rd Jul 2017 6:45am

wine & sad songs,
it makes the night...

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Re. Evening wine

23rd Jul 2017 8:59am

Lovely - enough to make one raise one's glass

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Re. Evening wine

23rd Jul 2017 1:30pm

Evening wine warms the tongue and rejuevenates the senses into relaxing.

Lovely imagery, Jemac.

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Re. Evening wine

23rd Jul 2017 3:41pm

beautiful and original descriptions - loved it :-)

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Re. Evening wine

23rd Jul 2017 4:28pm

Captivating...innovative imagery...weaving a magical spell that stirs the senses and whispers serenity to the soul..

Lovely lines, my friend

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Re. Evening wine

Anonymous

24th Jul 2017 2:10pm

You have an amazing ability to take just a few words and create the most incredible vistas for us. Simply beautiful...