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three senryu
Senryu
A year is a breath
A trivial cosmic moment
For me it is life
Life is not a plateau
But a stormy uphill struggle
The upland is a dream
He stopped dreaming
In the middle of the night
Death fell soft as rain.
A year is a breath
A trivial cosmic moment
For me it is life
Life is not a plateau
But a stormy uphill struggle
The upland is a dream
He stopped dreaming
In the middle of the night
Death fell soft as rain.
Published 22nd Jul 2017
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22nd Jul 2017 1:18pm
Did he stop dreaming or did he wake up?
Your form is different in this one. I like it as well as the imagery.
Your form is different in this one. I like it as well as the imagery.
22nd Jul 2017 3:35pm
