PENITENT PERHAPS

This is quite a unique angle to approach the subject of sacrifice, tightly woven and a very good delivery.
I saw the comp and it looks like its fun, this piece is a very good contender GW, good luck.

Thank you Rina. I've wanted to address the damming influences of two phrases for quite some time: "just one more..." and "just one last...." These are things that prevent change in my life. This comp gave me the opportunity to explore this theme. I appreciate so much your words of encouragement.

Excellent Write GW and no waste of words!!!
This was a True telling- at the stab to life

Good Luck in the comp-Tis Magnificent

Thank you Soul. Lately I've been short on inspiration. Comps help me focus my rampant thoughts. I appreciate very much your words of enciuragment such comments are a win for me.

May you be granted your last bacchanal before the abyss but you might be going the wrong direction for celestial bliss.  But what do I know?  I've gazed into the abyss myself and, so far, it's never looked back.  Lucky me!  I loved this short write Gahdess.  Good luck with the comp!

Thank you Crow. It seems a little disjointed to follow this up with a erotic piece...am I doomed?