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standing outside paradise

standing outside paradise

standing it on the threshold of paradise
so many angels came along to see

well done again
soon you will be cummming

here we need many  
standing
all drugged sleeping
none is seeping

not much population
no elongation
no masturbartion
no orgasmingashun

no not even ejhaculashun
solo  a curse
all guys shun
there are no more woemun
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