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Oblivion
Sickle spit on the soul
Revolving anxiety
this revolver
Tiiickkk
End it
Should I?
No gun, dreams are fickle
only pills to numb the pain
told to discard of the hord
2 overdoses are
Too many
(Apparently)
But you can't tell
Someone who needs assurance
to get rid of it
Someday they're wrap up my mind
And I'll slip into a beautiful oblivion
Rebellion?
No.
Just exhaustion
He has a
New girl now
Because
'I'll love you forever'
Doesn't mean shiiiiiit
When I ended it
I'm not angered
just settled in the security
that it's over
For always.
Revolving anxiety
this revolver
Tiiickkk
End it
Should I?
No gun, dreams are fickle
only pills to numb the pain
told to discard of the hord
2 overdoses are
Too many
(Apparently)
But you can't tell
Someone who needs assurance
to get rid of it
Someday they're wrap up my mind
And I'll slip into a beautiful oblivion
Rebellion?
No.
Just exhaustion
He has a
New girl now
Because
'I'll love you forever'
Doesn't mean shiiiiiit
When I ended it
I'm not angered
just settled in the security
that it's over
For always.
Published 19th Jul 2017
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19th Jul 2017 7:50pm
19th Jul 2017 8:47pm
Indeed. I messed it up beyond fixing and eventually he was going to move on, knowing he has hurts though
Anonymous
20th Jul 2017 1:18am
Ive so much to share with you.. .this just bring pains inside my stomach
all my love sweetie<3
all my love sweetie<3
24th Jul 2017 5:23pm
20th Jul 2017 4:02am
Oblivion is one of my favorite words, though a dread concept I only flirt with, as a linear being. It has been pointed out to me that I am also fond of the word miasma.
I've been through the heartbreak ringer kiddo. Big time. You really can't tell someone different than how they feel, that's why I kept it light, but I feel you.
I've been through the heartbreak ringer kiddo. Big time. You really can't tell someone different than how they feel, that's why I kept it light, but I feel you.
24th Jul 2017 5:25pm
What does miasma mean? (Says the person who studied words for four years) thanking you for your comment and time,my friend. Xx
25th Jul 2017 5:05am
Miasma is a great word because it is a noxious vapor, often depicted as a cloud or a mist. In metaphor, it can be used to describe a lot. Feelings of confusion, ill humor, melancholia. I have this brilliant friend who lives in Derbyshire and after reading a few dozen of my works, was able to pretty quickly pinpoint words I am fond of repeating. lol
