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Once Upon a Destiny
The Creators instrument,
Creator of your own intent
Finding peace within the sphere of eye
Fine tunes of serene
Once creating instrumentals
Of one accord,
Tuning the sound of Intimacy
Making mental notes floor
Intellectual responses
Leaving third eyes daunted
So close and so far
Was all that was ever wanted
Still vibing to beats in her sleep
Of the day the creator used him as her instrument
Now inspiration,
Temptation...
fighting dedication
To tune and steer the mend
And puppeteer our sentiment
Creator of your own intent
Finding peace within the sphere of eye
Fine tunes of serene
Once creating instrumentals
Of one accord,
Tuning the sound of Intimacy
Making mental notes floor
Intellectual responses
Leaving third eyes daunted
So close and so far
Was all that was ever wanted
Still vibing to beats in her sleep
Of the day the creator used him as her instrument
Now inspiration,
Temptation...
fighting dedication
To tune and steer the mend
And puppeteer our sentiment
Published 19th Jul 2017
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Anonymous
19th Jul 2017 5:37pm
I don't know why I keep wanting to read "her" with a capital H...somehow it seems fitting here. Always enjoy when you grace us with your pen.
19th Jul 2017 5:40pm
What's funny is I originally had quotations around each "her" so I know where your pull is from. You read with the capitol, I read with the quotations, because we both put so much on the value of "Her" :-). I decided to remove them and let the reader flow....but now you have me pondering....thank you as always for the read
This is such silky stimulation LT
You got poetic libations
on tap..
Another pour bar-tender...
Tend to them bars
and spill another verse
for the local gentry
to gain entry
into the deeper insights
of lyrical aptitude..
You got poetic libations
on tap..
Another pour bar-tender...
Tend to them bars
and spill another verse
for the local gentry
to gain entry
into the deeper insights
of lyrical aptitude..
19th Jul 2017 5:48pm
As always your responses trigger inspiration in my pen naaj....I see and hear you....I feel this piece is incomplete...yet it's all I could give for now.....my cup has been empty but slowly I am pouring it full.
19th Jul 2017 6:19pm
You, dear Lyrical simply captivate your readers with each n every nuance in your inks...it's very impressive :)
19th Jul 2017 6:45pm
Good to see you back luv..and thank you so much...your words are dear to me <3
20th Jul 2017 6:17am
5th Aug 2017 9:24pm
This piece is smooth, elegant and left me wanting more. I loved the pace, its captivating tone drew me in. Beautiful scribe my Queen.
14th Aug 2017 6:01pm
Thank you for being so uplifting king <3.....I'm flattered I could captivate you so.
5th Oct 2017 1:12pm
what a great blend of intelligence and creativity that stimulates thoughts beyond self.
5th Oct 2017 1:48pm
