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Re. SENRYU SUR LA VIE
18th Jul 2017 11:38pm
Re: Re. SENRYU SUR LA VIE
18th Jul 2017 11:56pm
Thank you so much Fairy! It's an effort to spark action in me. I have this awful tendancy to live with pain when it is within my power to change.
Re. SENRYU SUR LA VIE
19th Jul 2017 6:24pm
I tend to stoically live with pain but it's still driving me insane. Ascension can be achieved through various ways (meditation, etc) and it's a matter of picking the right one. A mantra helps. "Crimson and clover, over and over" is mine. Anyway, I love your wise and clever three lines. Bravo indeed!
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Re: Re. SENRYU SUR LA VIE
19th Jul 2017 7:37pm
Thank you Crow! I might choose James Taylor's "The secret of life is enjoying the passing of time." I always appreciate you wisdom. Take care.
Re. SENRYU SUR LA VIE
Anonymous
20th Jul 2017 3:51am
What a great positive message in this Senryu.
I'm so glad you still continue to do these forms which gives me inpiration to try and do them again.
I'm so glad you still continue to do these forms which gives me inpiration to try and do them again.
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Re: Re. SENRYU SUR LA VIE
20th Jul 2017 6:07am
Please do. I find so much power in expressing deep thought in a small amount of words.
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Re: Re. SENRYU SUR LA VIE
3rd Nov 2017 4:37am
Thank you Troublesome! I'm still falling...I am glad you reminded me of my own advice. You encourage me with your kind words.