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I spread the willing canvas
ready to receive my art
with hands eager to shape
and massage into form
intentions I can't seem to
vocalize in more than
deep sighs and grunts
focusing on the single
space of sensitive flesh
that binds empty stanzas
waiting to be penetrated
by an idea prolonged for
far too long
And all I can think of
is a Greek muse
with a Southern accent
whispering in my ear
It's not the
Publication
that maht-ters
Ya must enjoy
the Journal
takin' ya the'are
Undecided over which
stanza I want to fill
first
I hold the willing canvas
still ready to receive my art
with hands now trembling in
a n t i c i p a t i o n
Published 17th Jul 2017
| Edited 2nd Nov 2021
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Ya must enjoy
the Journal
takin' ya the'are
LOLOL! Autocorrect is rampant even in poetry! * facepalm *
You are an absolute Master of double-entendre.
focusing on the single
space of sensitive flesh
that binds two empty stanzas
waiting
to be penetrated
by an idea prolonged for
far too long
Bloody brilliant metephor ( all of it really ).
This is a delightful sketch of submitting to the " journal " of becoming. Of allowing it as it IS, and appreciating what's to come ( despite not fully knowing ).
To honor the blank space of BEING that it submit willingly to the Muse of Creation: that Source of Inspiration for all Great Artists and Poets, is the Secret of receiving.
the Journal
takin' ya the'are
LOLOL! Autocorrect is rampant even in poetry! * facepalm *
You are an absolute Master of double-entendre.
focusing on the single
space of sensitive flesh
that binds two empty stanzas
waiting
to be penetrated
by an idea prolonged for
far too long
Bloody brilliant metephor ( all of it really ).
This is a delightful sketch of submitting to the " journal " of becoming. Of allowing it as it IS, and appreciating what's to come ( despite not fully knowing ).
To honor the blank space of BEING that it submit willingly to the Muse of Creation: that Source of Inspiration for all Great Artists and Poets, is the Secret of receiving.
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