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well formed haiku - like it

Thank you! I strayed away from poetry for a long time. I figured I'd ease back in with a haiku.

I look forward to seeing more as you stray back along the primrose path

Loves blade weilded by your hand has carved out a testemony in scarred flesh to the horrors only our minds can manifest

Very powerful imagery in a few short words...nice work :)

brilliant

It can certainly feel so at times ... Bless and love ...

Cut deep enough and you will hit bone. Real good piece. Keep it flowing.

I feel you have been in my mind
Taken the lines I could never say
Taken my pain as yours
And put it on public display
Thank you for being braver than I