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Mood Swing Zero: Carnival Of Carnivores
at the tip of the iceberg?
shit..we haven't even landed yet..still on cloud 9
trying to condense years of metaphysical musings
into moments of physical inquisitions
the carnal has been seething with envy
our carnivorous creatures need to get acquainted now
feed off of this raw desire reeking through our pores
our eyes..our tones of speech
we're like open sores... infectious
we wanna have our cake and eat it too i suppose
appease the ego and satisfy the soul
to fuck or to make love?
can we have all of the above..and below?
there's so much to this..this thing between you and i
the depths of feelings..the heights of ecstasy..
the fuckin high
the immensity..the intensity
the density of it all..heavy vibes indeed
burdened between my legs thanks to you
like a pendulum my phallus done swung to your many moods
on some strictly instinctual type shit
i feel the need to stroke an epiphany inside you
strike a chord within me
get in tune with your nature
feel your river flow as the afterbirth of us
the aftermath of mixed lust is just the beginning
our love isn't even born yet in this reality
still lingering in its third trimester so we fester
savoring in the laboring
our inner beings nothing but voyeurs
watching our desires molest our bodies
shameless how we flaunt such wanton behavior
but we're more than just sexual savages
unable to salvage our potential
this is just another layer of us that needs to be peeled
so close to heaven
yet fully aware of what we're doing down here
adding to our repertoire of sensations
deeply engaged in this renaissance of the human experience
experimenting with each other's genitalia
like wayward alchemists stirring hips and thighs
with hopes of blurring the line
between the sweat of flesh and extraterrestrial vibes
searching for that next compound to add to our formula
we call the elixir of the gods
Published 11th Jul 2017
| Edited 12th Jul 2017
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12th Jul 2017 2:06am
"so close to heaven
yet fully aware of what we're doing down here
adding to our repertoire of sensations
deeply engaged in this renaissance of the human experience
experimenting with each other's genitalia
like wayward alchemists stirring hips and thighs
with hopes of blurring the line
between the sweat of flesh and extraterrestrial vibes
searching for that next compound to add to our formula
we call the elixir of the gods "
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ that right'thurr?!!
That was so damn SEXY!!!
Naajir, dont make me come find you!😘
yet fully aware of what we're doing down here
adding to our repertoire of sensations
deeply engaged in this renaissance of the human experience
experimenting with each other's genitalia
like wayward alchemists stirring hips and thighs
with hopes of blurring the line
between the sweat of flesh and extraterrestrial vibes
searching for that next compound to add to our formula
we call the elixir of the gods "
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ that right'thurr?!!
That was so damn SEXY!!!
Naajir, dont make me come find you!😘
12th Jul 2017 2:41am
Hey Naajir......Wowzers!!!!!! This is hot........luv the visuals you've printed in my mind........brilliant wording thru out.......enjoyed very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
12th Jul 2017 3:24am
Damn, i think you just described heaven and how it's like with texture and taste unlike i've ever read before..Naajir you knocked this one outa da park.
Anonymous
13th Jul 2017 3:06pm
Naaj, from beginning to end the intensity of this is almost overwhelming, as to be expected...your words weave and breathe life from all that is lust and love...just gorgeous ma'friend!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
15th Jul 2017 2:35am
(((Clap))) (((Clap))) (((Clap))) all right my brother, I see you are still marveling the plebians with that wondrous pen of yours. Like a dealer of literary dope, you give us a taste, instantly making us adicted and leaving us wanting more!
Red
Peace, love and light!
Red
Peace, love and light!
19th Jul 2017 8:56pm
Well hot dayummmmmmm *clutching my pears* lol..... Wait, wait..... did I just... did I just.... Cummmmmmmm lol..... Sheesh!! Talk about sultry, sexy, sensual.... Hot to death.... You just mentally stimulated me to the point of multiple orgasms lol...... Yesssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!! hot diggity' man this was off the charts....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
12th Aug 2017 5:26pm
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