wish list

I have spent a little time pondering the ends, which puts a devilish smile on my face, too. There is a lot of space in these few words for the mind to wander.

I  would have liked to be there at this moment. Glad you've enjoyed the reading.

Sounds enticing. Sounds like my kinda dance

Then save the last tango for me.

I sure will! lol

Direct...concise.....and yet, conveys soo much!

Might be rather enjoyable..to discover who is a c t u a l l y  in charge of this playground....  ;p

"...rather enjoyable..." Well, I definitely hope so. :-) Thanks for your kind comment.

On her face

That would definitely be my cup of tea :-).  
You sound quite subtle in your choice of words but the last line leaves no doubt who thinks will be mastering the game.
I definitely like this precious little haiku.

Thank you, Miss Chi, for your kind words. I'm glad that the message became clear. :-)

I love, love, love Haikus ... the last line is perfect. Bravo!

Thank you for kindly commenting on my poem.
I look forward to reading some of your haiku here on DUP.