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Try Me

i said
to her you are
way far out of my league
she then said to me, 'just try me'
i did.

my mum
says i'll be hurt
if i courted her so
but i did not care, was in love
my heart.

she said
men are afraid
to approach her up front
because of her extreme beauty
she's hot.

my bro
says she will leave
that she isn't 'the one'
she is too much of a player
my place.

i said
i'd gross you out
if we were to make love
she said, 'try me, i'm into you'
misjudged.
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