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Poetry
We're enveloped
inside out
the seal licked shut
Our hearts
masturbating
against the other
Engorged veins
pumping atrium
Press / release
PRESS / release
oxygen-poor history
oxygen-rich Musery
Natural speech
sustaining us
Ideas coming Hard
liquid Nouns
aggressive Verbs
groping Adjectives
No holds barred
framework
Conjunctions
Time and Space
connecting us
Forgoing metrical
structured balladry
Free Verse highway
Peaked intensity
Screaming
into the mirror
P' P' PO'ETRY y y y. . .
inside out
the seal licked shut
Our hearts
masturbating
against the other
Engorged veins
pumping atrium
Press / release
PRESS / release
oxygen-poor history
oxygen-rich Musery
Natural speech
sustaining us
Ideas coming Hard
liquid Nouns
aggressive Verbs
groping Adjectives
No holds barred
framework
Conjunctions
Time and Space
connecting us
Forgoing metrical
structured balladry
Free Verse highway
Peaked intensity
Screaming
into the mirror
P' P' PO'ETRY y y y. . .
Published 5th Jul 2017
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5th Jul 2017 6:52pm
5th Jul 2017 7:19pm
WHOOOOOOO!
I wanna ride shotgun ... with my hand up this woman's dress ... right off a fucking cliff.
I wanna ride shotgun ... with my hand up this woman's dress ... right off a fucking cliff.
6th Jul 2017 8:35pm
Grammar and a structural framework have their uses but the primal scream of poetry will not be contained. Fine work Adsila.
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Jul 2017 11:40pm
16th Jul 2017 11:35pm
I am so super late, im almost ashamed but in looovveee with this.
one day, im gonna get a telescope and see what else you got
hidden ;)
beautiful my dearest
one day, im gonna get a telescope and see what else you got
hidden ;)
beautiful my dearest
26th Jul 2017 00:17am
Our hearts
masturbating
against the other
Engorged veins...Call me weird but I find this so damned sexy.
masturbating
against the other
Engorged veins...Call me weird but I find this so damned sexy.
26th Oct 2017 5:22pm
Wow! This makes anxious to write again. I am so pleased that you find ecstasy in words.
"oxygen-poor history
oxygen-rich Musery "
Indeed!
Brava!
"oxygen-poor history
oxygen-rich Musery "
Indeed!
Brava!
26th Jun 2018 11:41pm
“Ideas coming Hard
liquid Nouns
aggressive Verbs
groping Adjectives.”
You could just imagine being awake but fill in the words of a erotic sleepwalk, no telling.
liquid Nouns
aggressive Verbs
groping Adjectives.”
You could just imagine being awake but fill in the words of a erotic sleepwalk, no telling.
17th Sep 2018 2:41pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
19th Dec 2019 9:37pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Jan 2020 5:45pm
29th Dec 2019 2:09am
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6th Feb 2020 7:13pm
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15th May 2020 00:50am
Poetry has so many lovers
This shared admiration for this art form is unquestionable
Such swearing of undying love for the cause
Loyal to the end as together we stand
This shared admiration for this art form is unquestionable
Such swearing of undying love for the cause
Loyal to the end as together we stand
