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Tell Me.......Do You?
tell me my sweet luver.....
do you feel my spirit within you
after our sexy luv making is over
moans of pleasure no longer heard
when silence creates visions
heart beat still a fast throb
do you feel my touches
gliding along your smooth sexy skin
laying there alone in darkness
making you horny for more
feeling my spirits presence luving you
do you feel my kisses lingering
embracing your passionate soft lips
kissing you with all my luv
while surrendering all of who I am
as your luving devoted soulmate
tell me my sweet luver.......DO YOU?
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
do you feel my spirit within you
after our sexy luv making is over
moans of pleasure no longer heard
when silence creates visions
heart beat still a fast throb
do you feel my touches
gliding along your smooth sexy skin
laying there alone in darkness
making you horny for more
feeling my spirits presence luving you
do you feel my kisses lingering
embracing your passionate soft lips
kissing you with all my luv
while surrendering all of who I am
as your luving devoted soulmate
tell me my sweet luver.......DO YOU?
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
5th Jul 2017 1:49pm
When love is real all that you ask will be forthcoming. Nice work here.
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Re: Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
6th Jul 2017 3:20am
Hey Jerry.........thank you for your never ending support.......it touches me greatly.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
5th Jul 2017 6:05pm
after our sexy luv making is over
moans of pleasure no longer heard
a satisfied guy will just sleep
and
second time in the wakefulness
of another morning
wooden
great purplish nk as usual
moans of pleasure no longer heard
a satisfied guy will just sleep
and
second time in the wakefulness
of another morning
wooden
great purplish nk as usual
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Re: Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
6th Jul 2017 3:45am
Hey Again......happy you enjoyed this one........thank you for your support......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
6th Jul 2017 5:37pm
Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
6th Jul 2017 8:08am
Very sensual piece of writing that leads us into your private world of love and passion, not as voyeurs but as if we become one with you. Hugs
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Re: Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
9th Jul 2017 4:11am
Hey KOH.......your graceful words touch me.......I'm glad you felt this so deeply........thank you for smiling upon my ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
6th Jul 2017 12:37pm
Love definitely knows no distance. And some who are close physically are clueless compared to those who are bonded spiritually. ❤
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Re: Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
9th Jul 2017 4:15am
Hey Ahavati........you felt this exactly how I did and meant it.......a spiritual connection between souls can happen without even one physical touch.......my Bee & Me are proof of this......thank you for your graceful words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
6th Jul 2017 5:13pm
It got me to wondering, what if the answer was "No" - there I go again looking for the negative :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
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Re: Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
10th Jul 2017 6:03pm
Hey David.......good thought.......guess if the answer is NO......then I've been a fool nice again.......thank you for thought provoking words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
6th Jul 2017 8:52pm
This is a delight Flower, tender and lightly erotic. You might find the answer to your question in his eyes. Lovely work!
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Re: Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
10th Jul 2017 6:11pm
Hey Crow.......you always cause me to smile........you're so right.......eyes tell a lot of emotions......thank you for your thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
9th Jul 2017 2:55am
I am surrounded by auditory memories of Santana's work when reading this. The true meaning of taking sex beyond the physical plane.
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Re: Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
10th Jul 2017 6:16pm
Hey Jazz........it's a luv you always feel........no matter how far you maybe from each other.........thank you for the honored of being a Santana song........purple luv & hugs xo ;)
Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
12th Jul 2017 3:56am
this is adorable and more. at first thought it should have been labeled erotica BUT after reading it a few time i give it a big HELL YEAH for inspirational. tis inspiring me :)
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Re: Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
12th Jul 2017 4:02am
Hey S.......thank you for visiting my ink.......I'm honored for the "HELL YEAH"......glad it inspired you.......you've made me smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Tell Me.......Do You?
18th Jul 2017 2:22am
They JT....thank you so very much for your visit upon my ink......I'm glad you enjoyed it.......purple luv & hugs xo :)