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Final Goodbye
Dr. Frankenstein
built a lady
just for me
so pristine
eternal beauty
walking dream
curve appeal
skin tight
non-deserving
battered being
shotgun soul
full of holes
love me hard
i want real
no gimmicks
subject to change
take this man
full of flaws
fill the voids
make me whole
non-deserving
battered being
shotgun soul
full of holes
ugly creature
striking fear
so alone
wanting her
come hither
dangerous one
deviant sex
loaded gun
bled for days
sucked dry
just one kiss
before death
buried for
labeled sin
sweet lips
final goodbye
built a lady
just for me
so pristine
eternal beauty
walking dream
curve appeal
skin tight
non-deserving
battered being
shotgun soul
full of holes
love me hard
i want real
no gimmicks
subject to change
take this man
full of flaws
fill the voids
make me whole
non-deserving
battered being
shotgun soul
full of holes
ugly creature
striking fear
so alone
wanting her
come hither
dangerous one
deviant sex
loaded gun
bled for days
sucked dry
just one kiss
before death
buried for
labeled sin
sweet lips
final goodbye
Published 4th Jul 2017
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5th Jul 2017 1:18am
Dave this is bad ass!!!
"ugly creature
striking fear
so alone
wanting her
come hither
dangerous one
deviant sex
loaded gun"
love this my brother..
love you..
xo Brenda
"ugly creature
striking fear
so alone
wanting her
come hither
dangerous one
deviant sex
loaded gun"
love this my brother..
love you..
xo Brenda
5th Jul 2017 1:42am
5th Jul 2017 3:55pm
6th Jul 2017 8:03pm
Oxy.. not at all.. just a person who feels dead inside.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
7th Jul 2017 4:42am
At this time I can only say that I love this write, I love you and Bravo! because I am desperately pressed for time, it's not that I don't want to say more like I normally would. I have been reading every poem over the past few days and having to multitask has fucked up my flojo. Please forgive this copy and pasted comment. Know this is killing me!!
Xoxo Taryn
"love me hard
i want real
no gimmicks
subject to change
take this man
full of flaws
fill the voids
make me whole"
~ EXCELLENT! I LOVED THIS my brother!!!!
Xoxo Taryn
"love me hard
i want real
no gimmicks
subject to change
take this man
full of flaws
fill the voids
make me whole"
~ EXCELLENT! I LOVED THIS my brother!!!!
8th Jul 2017 4:41am
Lady Taryn.. no apologies needed.. this was a killer comment... i'm so humbled by your kind words... love you my beautiful sister... Dave
Anonymous
8th Jul 2017 5:41pm
oh god yea, fuck, ha!
everytime you arrive..you bring living enigmatic languages..
wow, spine curving
everytime you arrive..you bring living enigmatic languages..
wow, spine curving
8th Jul 2017 9:25pm
Sunsets.. so glad you enjoyed.. always love your commentary.. much appreciated.. Dave
22nd Jul 2017 4:51pm
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