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Soon~
There's a place I haven't been to yet, I'm not sure where it is
Left thinking it doesn't exist, left hoping it will find me
One day all my problems will be gone, but until that day
I'll carry myself this way and that, feeling the pull and push
Of every day life, of fantasy, of lust, of love and pain
I am where I was supposed to be, doing what I was supposed to do
My sentence has reached the end, soon I'll be where I want to be
Left thinking it doesn't exist, left hoping it will find me
One day all my problems will be gone, but until that day
I'll carry myself this way and that, feeling the pull and push
Of every day life, of fantasy, of lust, of love and pain
I am where I was supposed to be, doing what I was supposed to do
My sentence has reached the end, soon I'll be where I want to be
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Re. Soon~
3rd Jul 2017 6:18pm
Sounds like you're buffeted by circumstance. That's fine, as long as the destination (and destiny) are reached. And soon! Fine write Tommie.
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6th Jul 2017 5:12pm
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3rd Jul 2017 6:28pm
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3rd Jul 2017 7:23pm
so good to see you back lovely Tommie
I feel this deep
you deserve all the happiness in the world
I ache for the time you've served
not being where you want to be
on to better days beautiful :)
love Brenda
I feel this deep
you deserve all the happiness in the world
I ache for the time you've served
not being where you want to be
on to better days beautiful :)
love Brenda
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6th Jul 2017 5:11pm
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3rd Jul 2017 8:59pm
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6th Jul 2017 5:13pm
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4th Jul 2017 4:01am
right, somewhere we've never traveled, as Cummings said;
it's a sincere wanderlust, Tommie...
it's a sincere wanderlust, Tommie...
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6th Jul 2017 5:15pm
Re. Soon~
6th Jul 2017 2:44pm
Pessimists say never, optimists say soon.
I know which one I prefer.
Good work. :)
I know which one I prefer.
Good work. :)
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6th Jul 2017 5:15pm