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the hidden pages
my mind is empty
with a heart full of pain
i drank from the devil's cup
he stole my thoughts
as poison kissed lips
tourniquet can't stop flow
bleeding words
run & pour
from slit veins
then drunk dry
by the powers that be
they thirst for my demise
to see me quieted
& no longer able to cue mankind
they wrap around my cerebellum
with hedonistic intent
they hunger for my creation
to have my key
my knowledge
they hunt me as i sleep
pull on my soul
as i meditate
with tendrils of hate
they taste my weakness
give us your power
i am implored
in mortal form
the power i wield
is no longer mine to give
it has been entrusted
to an ancient being
it's hidden among the tomes of history
seek me in the archives
of man's rise & fall
then you will know my face
leave me to my peace
drink another dry
in vice i'm weak
i will stumble & falter
still you won't uncover my secret
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Re. the hidden pages
3rd Jul 2017 6:29am
it's an ancient leather-bound volume, Crim,
kept under lock & key, recording
these wars that never end...
kept under lock & key, recording
these wars that never end...
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Re: Re. the hidden pages
3rd Jul 2017 6:37am
Re. the hidden pages
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2017 12:58pm
Never stay hidden Crim. You keep becoming more beautiful
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3rd Jul 2017 1:31pm
Re. the hidden pages
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2017 1:48pm
write crim write
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Re: Re. the hidden pages
3rd Jul 2017 2:11pm
Re. the hidden pages
The magic of your cerebellum will thwart the evil ones persistent challenges, my friend. Hang tough!
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Re: Re. the hidden pages
3rd Jul 2017 3:50pm
Re. the hidden pages
3rd Jul 2017 4:39pm
Wonderful poetess, make them break to your bend, curl back dissipate into the ether of their obsidian ventricle, blooming ultraviolet soliloquies hyacinth scribes turning their tears to glass
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Re: Re. the hidden pages
3rd Jul 2017 4:52pm
thank you graciously dearest poet for such a breathtakingly beautiful comment.. sage advise.. love Crimsin
Re. the hidden pages
3rd Jul 2017 6:14pm
Comfort in the chaos!
They will never find you.
Eternal no matter what paint chips, what poisons lips.
I haven't crossed paths with a writer as good as you in quite some time.
Your FAMOUS!
Thank you.
.......Christopher
They will never find you.
Eternal no matter what paint chips, what poisons lips.
I haven't crossed paths with a writer as good as you in quite some time.
Your FAMOUS!
Thank you.
.......Christopher
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Re: Re. the hidden pages
3rd Jul 2017 7:40pm
thank you dearest Christopher I think that is one of the nicest comment i've gotten in a long time I am honored :) love Brenda
Re. the hidden pages
3rd Jul 2017 6:41pm
The powers that be are no match for you and the ancient being who inspires you. These lines contain magic and mystery. Your hidden pages reveal much....
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3rd Jul 2017 7:41pm
Re. the hidden pages
3rd Jul 2017 7:59pm
this leaves me breathless - I want to come to your rescue like a legless knight on a white charger - this aint gonna happen - would 1000 ehugs do?
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Re: Re. the hidden pages
3rd Jul 2017 8:03pm
thank you David you come like a knight everyday with your presence :) I love you dear friend.. love & hugs Brenda
Re. the hidden pages
4th Jul 2017 3:15am
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4th Jul 2017 2:31pm
Re. the hidden pages
Anonymous
4th Jul 2017 5:31am
My Beautiful Brenda...as long as you keep writing nothing will be taken from you...they are no match for all you are made of...your secrets will hold onto you to be shared time and time again and we will always be here waiting to be gifted with them.
I love you madly deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you madly deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. the hidden pages
4th Jul 2017 2:35pm
thank you my love no you are right they don't have the power to take from me.. I will share with you my love & others what it still held by me to gift.. as you do me with your oh so beautiful writes & soul.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda
Re. the hidden pages
Anonymous
4th Jul 2017 4:51pm
Brenda.. truly brilliant, and beautiful.. just like the poetess, who shares with us.. you truly are a goddess of art.. love you always, my sister..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. the hidden pages
5th Jul 2017 4:23am
thank you Dave graciously Dave for such a beautiful comment you gifted me with smiles :) love you my brother.. Brenda
Re. the hidden pages
Anonymous
5th Jul 2017 2:46pm
The initial words and stanzas of this one were almost gasping for breath in their desolate ache. But then it soothed out into a more softened sigh toward the end. Like growth and expansion. I started out wanting to hug you and console, I ended wanting to dance with you and sing. Always with much love and hugs, my beautiful Dark Angel.
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Re: Re. the hidden pages
5th Jul 2017 3:19pm
thank you lovely one for feeling this write so deeply.. we can dance & sing together that sounds like a beautiful idea.. love you lady.. xo Crim
Re. the hidden pages
5th Jul 2017 8:41pm
i am always in awe of your flexibility with subject & form, how fluid your writing remains between entries examining light & dark ...
... you never lose your edges or the gripping imagery i've come to associate with your poetry
you hold me utterly spellbound each & every time
xo
... you never lose your edges or the gripping imagery i've come to associate with your poetry
you hold me utterly spellbound each & every time
xo
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Re: Re. the hidden pages
6th Jul 2017 4:30am
thank you graciously beautiful one coming from you i am both deeply humbled & honored.. you really made my week today with your thoughts & presence.. love you lady.. Brenda