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Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
walking the edge of then ~ now ~ yesterday ~ today
felt deep within me my heart was breaking to let go of us
realized long after our love demolished I hurt more with you than without
precious friend came beside me and we bared souls to one another
we held each other's hearts walking along the edge of pain together
she tells me how beautiful my smile is these days than ~ THEN
how tears don't fall so easily at the mention of your name ~ Now
there are times when memories hurt as if they were ~ YESTERDAY
so proud how pain used to control me but not ~ TODAY
Copyright © 2017 Lena-underneath & Flower All Rights Reserved
felt deep within me my heart was breaking to let go of us
realized long after our love demolished I hurt more with you than without
precious friend came beside me and we bared souls to one another
we held each other's hearts walking along the edge of pain together
she tells me how beautiful my smile is these days than ~ THEN
how tears don't fall so easily at the mention of your name ~ Now
there are times when memories hurt as if they were ~ YESTERDAY
so proud how pain used to control me but not ~ TODAY
Copyright © 2017 Lena-underneath & Flower All Rights Reserved
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Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
3rd Jul 2017 00:15am
Re: Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
5th Jul 2017 4:30am
Hey Diamond.......honored to see your smile upon our ink.....happy you enjoyed......we thank you......luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2017 00:31am
Brilliant
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Re: Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
5th Jul 2017 4:37am
Hey Messier........thank you for visiting our ink........we are glad you enjoyed......luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
3rd Jul 2017 00:50am
My,my, you two come up with one hell of a poem! The personal touch both of you gave of yourself, made this poem one of a kind. Can't say it enough, this is one fantastic poem!
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Hey Jerry........we think you're so sweet our friend.......happy our ink touched you in such a way.......thank you for making us smile......honored vy the RL add on.......luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
3rd Jul 2017 1:14am
beautiful Flower & lovely Lena this is tenderly beautiful..
combined you made magic..
love Crim
combined you made magic..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
6th Jul 2017 3:55am
Hey Crim.......we thank you very much........your words are magic to us........always makes me smile to see you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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3rd Jul 2017 11:49am
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Re: Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
6th Jul 2017 4:00am
Hey Lily.......that's a compliment coming from you.......one with such a beautiful soul and smile.......we thank you very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
3rd Jul 2017 2:28pm
realized long after our love demolished I hurt more with you than without
That right there is the crux. When the pain of staying together becomes greater than the pain of separation, it's time to let go.
This is very well done you two. A nice melding of voices.
That right there is the crux. When the pain of staying together becomes greater than the pain of separation, it's time to let go.
This is very well done you two. A nice melding of voices.
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Re: Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
6th Jul 2017 4:05am
Hey Ahavati.........you got our point exactly........hardest thing to do when you luv a soul......but it's the only way to preserve yourself.......we thank you for your insight......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
3rd Jul 2017 4:49pm
Wow Purple Princess these are some awesome comments and what a wonderful idea you had. It's always an honor to work with you mamacita...xo
Thank you all for your comments!
Thank you all for your comments!
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Re: Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
6th Jul 2017 4:09am
Hey beautiful Lena........I always enjoy sharing ink with you........you're such a great talent........thank you for the honire once again.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
3rd Jul 2017 6:44pm
I love your give and take on this and I suspect you traded off, taking turns with each line. However you did it this is a fine collab, well structured and very edgy.
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Re: Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
6th Jul 2017 3:12pm
Hey Crow.........we are thrilled you enjoyed our ink together........thank you for gracing us with your words......appreciate your support.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
3rd Jul 2017 7:48pm
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6th Jul 2017 3:25pm
Hey David.......appreciate your smile upon our ink........thank you for your praise........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
3rd Jul 2017 8:09pm
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6th Jul 2017 3:29pm
Hey Again.........thank you for smiling upon our ink.......nope I haven't lost my purpleness........the pic has a special meaning behind it.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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5th Aug 2017 9:52pm
well the revised site helps guys to know what happeneded to the comments they'd made now let em cum again and again
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Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
4th Jul 2017 1:05am
Great collab you two! Lovely imagery. Happy to see you guys inking together. Lena, i did not know you were back.,💗
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6th Jul 2017 2:15pm
Re: Re. Walking The Edge (collab w/Lena-underneath & Flower)
6th Jul 2017 3:33pm
Hey Rain.........thank you for your visit upon our ink........I'm thrilled Lena is back too.......luv sharing ink with her.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2017 1:59am
Very cool Collab Flower and Lena, your pens have merged seamlessly in a unique way. It's all about being supportive and empathetic, there's not one soul that hasn't experienced heartbreak but the way we pick outselves up and move on is the key. Good job girls!
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9th Jul 2017 2:33am
Hey Vee......very happy to see your smile upon our ink.......you're so right......we've all been thru heartbreak.......to find strength to let go is the greatest of all.......thank you for your graceful words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)