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broken
sinking
you're falling
gasping for air
but everywhere you turn, you face despair
fallin deeper
you seek her
dying from lies
felling pain from hemmorage inside
fall to the grown
you lie there and drown
people crowd around
you punch and you kick
the time it ticks
as you scream
is this all a dream
you seek an angel of deliverence
but all you feel is your bodies severance
you're falling
gasping for air
but everywhere you turn, you face despair
fallin deeper
you seek her
dying from lies
felling pain from hemmorage inside
fall to the grown
you lie there and drown
people crowd around
you punch and you kick
the time it ticks
as you scream
is this all a dream
you seek an angel of deliverence
but all you feel is your bodies severance
Published 9th Dec 2009
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8th Jun 2012 1:22am
started hot the got real choppy after "feeling pain from hemmorage inside" could be seperated and revised.?. very manic! in a good way ;)
