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night visions ..
it's odd how night
blurs the edges
not just of the buildings
but of situations
when the jutting
awkwardness of life
is for a time
merely a matter
of gradations
gently greying
greying into barely
perceptible
permutations ..
Published 28th Jun 2017
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28th Jun 2017 00:52am
'Gently greying into barely
perceptible
permutations .. '
These lines remind me that, a lot like life, it drifts by until there is no more. This write is almost romantic, soothing even. :-)
perceptible
permutations .. '
These lines remind me that, a lot like life, it drifts by until there is no more. This write is almost romantic, soothing even. :-)
guess in the dark
it's harder to see
the dividing lines
and, yes, I find
that comforting ..
it's harder to see
the dividing lines
and, yes, I find
that comforting ..
Anonymous
28th Jun 2017 1:16am
nice
28th Jun 2017 1:19am
28th Jun 2017 2:01am
28th Jun 2017 9:24am
28th Jun 2017 3:37pm
the difference between day and night can indeed be staggering - well written truth :-)
28th Jun 2017 4:36pm
I find the Darkness a sanctuary...soul soothing. Add a pair of night-goggles...some night music...and sometimes, it's quite magical... (ahhh...those permutations....
A Scribe of Serenity..mo Chara
A Scribe of Serenity..mo Chara
29th Jun 2017 2:40pm
3rd Jul 2017 8:59pm
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