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A Rose by Any Other Name
What is a rose by any other name?
Would that the answer startle you?
The pink folds,
The spreading out,
As though awaiting pleasure sent.
Eventually closing around itself
It has served its purpose,
Given passion to those who claimed her,
Now it is the time to move on gracefully.
ŠJune 4, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton
Would that the answer startle you?
The pink folds,
The spreading out,
As though awaiting pleasure sent.
Eventually closing around itself
It has served its purpose,
Given passion to those who claimed her,
Now it is the time to move on gracefully.
ŠJune 4, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton
Published 28th Jun 2017
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28th Jun 2017 00:09am
Your comments give me great incentive to keep on keeping on, Brenda. Love you right back . . .
28th Jun 2017 1:39am
as your's do me my friend keep writing I enjoy what you have to say :) love Brenda
28th Jun 2017 3:44am
28th Jun 2017 00:56am
Move on gracefully to get some much needed rest I should think, hehe. Nice words Jerry & interesting perception; nearly always involving nature or natural elements in some way.
28th Jun 2017 1:37am
Many thanks, Purple, I so appreciate your thoughts, and I agree with them, especially, "some much needed rest." Heh.Heh
28th Jun 2017 2:15am
Hey Jerry.......beautifully done.......it's so so WOW!! The multiple emotions I felt reading down your words is amazing.......enjoyed very much.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Jun 2017 3:01am
Thank you big time, flower. I am eternally grateful for your thoughts and words about my poem.
Anonymous
30th Jun 2017 2:36am
Jerry, such a lovely write...and I am going over each line, and the interpretations can be multi faceted...making this brain pause for a moment and think quietly, smiling regardless of what each line tells me every time.
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
Your words gave me great pleasure, Taryn. The lines are what they are. Interpret them as you will. Thank you so very, very much for hanging in with me on my poetical writin.
