Holding Hands With Solitude

Music can make life more peaceful; it can be a kind of escapism too. I like the rap esqué rhythm used in your write; you have the skill for it. May you one day find the soulful ambiance you are searching for, Lyrical_Aptitude.   ;-)

I appreciate the kind words and the read. Yes indeed music is therapy...for it is the universal language of mankind <3

Very lyrical poem, great flow, great piece. A lot of truth and wisdom within these words, great piece.




~anonshadow

Thank you for overstanding PS :-)

This is a beautiful piece. I agree with all of the above comments. Very lyrical and the imagery really stands out like "If your heart poured,
it would leak liquid steel.." which was one of my favorite lines. Great piece.

Thank you so much for your feedback eswaller. I appreciate it <3 and thank you for reading.

as if curiousity is a venom in your viens... oh how I yearn for your satisfaction and resolution
"If your heart poured,
it would leak liquid steel"
love this line  

A venom with a slow drip IV left on infinity drip.....I yearn for it as well....however satisfaction and resolution do not seem part of my universes neat plan. I'm more in the phase of acceptance now. Patient acceptance. Thank you for reading freelove....I appreciate it...as always. <3

I'm never disappointed when I read your words. You have a gift for speaking truth in incredible language. Your rhythm is like a signet ring seal...very uniquely and sublimely your own. Much enjoyed and completely agree

You give me goosebumps of inspiration.. I thank you for being so uplifting...too be able to leave a unique and sublime ink trace is a success to my chaotic brain. Thank you

Lyrical, I am always so mesmerized by your word coupling and the flow it creates...you are an entity all your own. So many truths within this piece and one thing is for certain, your words shall never fade off into a page...they resonate long after they're read.

Xoxo Taryn

Ahh taryn...you left me with glistening eyes on this one. What you see in my words I see in yours so I always feel so inspired when someone of such lyrical magnitude is moved by my write. "You are an entity all your own"...I wear that compliment with strong pride. Thank you <3

This is a very lyrical piece! Well done.

Thank you :-)

"If your heart poured,
it would leak liquid steel
It would cover emotions in black dust
Thick enough to make ash from lust
Removing vibes
Exposing true sides "

like Mercury
heavy hearts sink to the bottom

profound stylish and impressionable ink as always

Thank you naaj. I appreciate you reading. Indeed they sink....but nothing is keeping them from detoxing to float again.