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What Lives Inside (Darkenedpoet vs. Diamonddave)
dave, you lost focus
what is this shit
pure hocus pocus
biting the bit
it’s all blasphemy
forgetting the code
psychological fee
some sentimental mode
so young
anger rampant
promises hidden
by the trees
i’ve grown
beyond anger
been set
free
where’s the balls
passion rising
echoing off walls
without compromising
fuck sympathy
no handouts
simple destiny
killing doubt
narrow minded
guilt ridden
so foreign
from love
i know you
what’s hidden
compassion
lives inside
This poem is about the difference between my youth, and me now..
what is this shit
pure hocus pocus
biting the bit
it’s all blasphemy
forgetting the code
psychological fee
some sentimental mode
so young
anger rampant
promises hidden
by the trees
i’ve grown
beyond anger
been set
free
where’s the balls
passion rising
echoing off walls
without compromising
fuck sympathy
no handouts
simple destiny
killing doubt
narrow minded
guilt ridden
so foreign
from love
i know you
what’s hidden
compassion
lives inside
This poem is about the difference between my youth, and me now..
Published 27th Jun 2017
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27th Jun 2017 3:42am
27th Jun 2017 3:49am
Brenda.. much appreciated.. i was inspired by you.. that somewhere and sometime worlds collide.. alter-egos fight, and you have to find balance.. i'm a much better person and poet now.. it was very difficult to write in my old style.. so honored to make your reading list.. love you, my sister.. Dave
27th Jun 2017 4:15am
27th Jun 2017 4:23am
Hades.. thanks so much... very appreciated.. brothers in steel forever... Dave
27th Jun 2017 12:44pm
28th Jun 2017 00:29am
Anonymous
28th Jun 2017 5:38pm
My brother it's always so interesting when we think back to the people we once were and all we have become since then...excellent ink!!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
8th Jul 2017 4:51am
Lady Taryn.. i agree, i've changed a lot.. some of the core principals are there.. but i've also opened my heart to love.. which changes a lot.. love you sis.... Dave
