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Twenty four hours
I doubt my sleep
gives small respite
If I were to go
go to confessional
I'd tell him to create more
more hours
Twenty four hours
just doesn't seem enough
When on my mind
missing you
Twenty four hours
I doubt my sleep
gives small respite
If I were to go
go to confessional
I'd tell him to create more
more hours
Twenty four hours
just doesn't seem enough
When on my mind
missing you
Published 26th Jun 2017
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Anonymous
27th Jun 2017 1:56am
sometimes a lifetime is not enough to dream and daydream about that one special person , im so with you on this one Rose, i think we need to boycott time ;)
27th Jun 2017 4:40am
Yes But I'm in a missing someone situation and although at times painful, I'm with the mind of wanting more hours of missing them in a day, painful but beautiful in its emotion that not many get That's why the write was about wanting more hours not less xD
Anonymous
27th Jun 2017 4:01am
My Sweet Rose...this one didn't have me smiling so much...there is one hidden underneath though for what created this melancholy piece...time can suck...
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
27th Jun 2017 4:43am
Agreed but more hours please xD
The pain of loves emotions
Means I'm in it
And how beautiful is that
XD
The pain of loves emotions
Means I'm in it
And how beautiful is that
XD
