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Lemonie 1
Shall we gaze upon your star
Whose twinkle luminates so far?
Shall we walk beside our ocean?
Long and far from Man's commotion
Suffer we to remain us here
Eternal company brings good cheer!
I gaze into your eye and feel
Warm & bold & full of zeal
What powers you possess, my love
Focused trial's perfect dove
If none of us be from above
Alas! I perish with words of Love.
Whose twinkle luminates so far?
Shall we walk beside our ocean?
Long and far from Man's commotion
Suffer we to remain us here
Eternal company brings good cheer!
I gaze into your eye and feel
Warm & bold & full of zeal
What powers you possess, my love
Focused trial's perfect dove
If none of us be from above
Alas! I perish with words of Love.
Published 26th Jun 2017
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26th Jun 2017 6:42pm
Hey KS.........this is absolutely stunning........luv expressed so beautifully.........RL for me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
3rd Jul 2017 7:30pm
line 5 sounds a bit rhythmically odd, compared to the surrounding lines. my favorite line is line 8.
