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lotus
the rain came
& brought with it
sweet serenity
lotus blossoms
thrive in murky waters
so can I
a waterfall of perception
cascades over my thoughts
eases me into acceptance
with enlightenment
transforms the dark
into a calm pond
where I can grow
full & lush
beautifully new
as the pale sun rises
with gentle rays
& gives light without any burn
in my secluded garden of hope
as I transcend the pain
that confounds me
I take root with the source
that feeds & nourishes
& bloom within self
a warrior soul
to face the world with
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 24th Jun 2017
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24th Jun 2017 9:51pm
And face that world you surely must. Face it, fists clenched and ready to do battle!
Anonymous
25th Jun 2017 00:01am
I felt almost as though I was taken through a moment of meditation, my lovely Angel. You settled over me with a sweet peace. I can see you as a beautiful lotus blossom. So beautiful watching you bloom. So much love...
25th Jun 2017 00:43am
thank you lovely one this is a meditation of sorts I'm happy it brought you peace.. as it did me.. love you lady.. xo Crim
25th Jun 2017 00:07am
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25th Jun 2017 10:22pm
thank you PR the sun was just starting to shine on my dark day when I wrote this.. love Crim
25th Jun 2017 2:11am
Now that's what I'm talking about! Beatiful imagery. Powerful stanzas that exude confidence and determination. Nice work.
25th Jun 2017 10:23pm
Anonymous
25th Jun 2017 3:10am
Brenda.. simply beautiful, on so many levels.. into the list it goes.. love you..
Dave
Dave
25th Jun 2017 10:24pm
25th Jun 2017 3:17am
25th Jun 2017 10:25pm
Anonymous
25th Jun 2017 4:39pm
My Beautiful Brenda...Regardless of the waters you are found to be bathing in, one thing is for sure...you will always thrive, your soul glows too brightly not to kill off any of the contaminants which may try to invade and take over...
I love you passionately ❤️
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately ❤️
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
25th Jun 2017 10:26pm
thank you my love I will learn to thrive in the dark & kick some demon ass ;) I love you deeply.. love Brenda
Anonymous
25th Jun 2017 7:48pm
Hey Crim.......this is stunning.......i read the other day but I was lost for words and I still am.......gorgeous ink........purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Jun 2017 10:27pm
25th Jun 2017 8:40pm
I am glad you wrote this special piece - today hopefully was a good day :-)
love and hugs
David :-)
love and hugs
David :-)
25th Jun 2017 10:27pm
25th Jun 2017 9:27pm
Beauty thrives in unlikely places;
even in darkness...
Damaged, but never broken;
like the lotus it will bloom again.
So beautiful, Crim...
even in darkness...
Damaged, but never broken;
like the lotus it will bloom again.
So beautiful, Crim...
25th Jun 2017 10:28pm
thank you beautiful Kasai yes you got it exactly right love your comment :) love Crim
