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Summer is Over
It's only summer until it arrives
Then it flies by in a blink
I used to declare July 4th as the end
Only the half bottle of lemonade remains
Then it flies by in a blink
I used to declare July 4th as the end
Only the half bottle of lemonade remains
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Re. Summer is Over
23rd Jun 2017 1:51pm
Not a big summer fan anyway but i feel you each summer flies by faster.
time waits for no one ... your poetry is so reflective, I like that ...
love
Jackie xoxox
time waits for no one ... your poetry is so reflective, I like that ...
love
Jackie xoxox
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Re: Re. Summer is Over
23rd Jun 2017 1:53pm
The older you get the more reflection plays a card Love the comment !!!! Thank you Xxxx
Re. Summer is Over
23rd Jun 2017 2:06pm
Oh nooos! Only the lemonade remains! Guess we'll just have to make. . .wait. . .:D
Good write, Poet. I'm an Autumn person mtself, so in respects to Summer passing fast, yeah. Hiwever, in respects to Time passing so fast, not so much.
Good write, Poet. I'm an Autumn person mtself, so in respects to Summer passing fast, yeah. Hiwever, in respects to Time passing so fast, not so much.
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Re. Summer is Over
23rd Jun 2017 2:34pm
Thx
I like summer evenings, taking walks in the park, maybe an ice cream from the lone truck on the edge of the oasis. Summer in the city is a challenge to your grit . You have to find places to chill .....
I like summer evenings, taking walks in the park, maybe an ice cream from the lone truck on the edge of the oasis. Summer in the city is a challenge to your grit . You have to find places to chill .....
Re. Summer is Over
23rd Jun 2017 2:54pm
dearest Poet I can only imagine how lovely it is in the summers in NYC here out in Cali we're baking at 111 yesterday..
you make me remiss for places i've never been with your writes..
save some lemonade for me..
love Brenda
you make me remiss for places i've never been with your writes..
save some lemonade for me..
love Brenda
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Re. Summer is Over
23rd Jun 2017 2:57pm
Then top that bottle of lemonade off with bourbon and keep the summer going!
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Re: Re. Summer is Over
23rd Jun 2017 3:13pm
Re. Summer is Over
23rd Jun 2017 2:57pm
On the streets it's a sweat box and a junge of people.
I know some secret places though
Xx
I know some secret places though
Xx
Re. Summer is Over
23rd Jun 2017 5:54pm
Re. Summer is Over
24th Jun 2017 4:57am
Re. Summer is Over
Anonymous
24th Jun 2017 2:52pm
We need an endless bottle of lemonade. I don't mind autumn, but I love the lemonade.
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Re: Re. Summer is Over
24th Jun 2017 3:02pm
Re. Summer is Over
25th Jun 2017 1:57am
Oh noooo don't say that lol
I recently rediscovered Staten Island and some cool places. Didn't realize how beautiful it is there. Then there's also Governor Island. Finally my personal back yard, Central Park. I'm gonna enjoy this summer thru September.
I recently rediscovered Staten Island and some cool places. Didn't realize how beautiful it is there. Then there's also Governor Island. Finally my personal back yard, Central Park. I'm gonna enjoy this summer thru September.
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Re. Summer is Over
25th Jun 2017 12:41pm
Re. Summer is Over
Anonymous
25th Jun 2017 7:45pm
Lemonade and buttered popcorn...I can bring the popcorn if you're game...
seasonal like
- S
xx
seasonal like
- S
xx
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Re. Summer is Over
25th Jun 2017 9:07pm
Summer now just serves to remind me of so many things I can no longer do - I like winter, inside warm and cosy :-)
bIG lIKE :-)
bIG lIKE :-)
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Re: Re. Summer is Over
25th Jun 2017 9:11pm