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renga: tiger dawn
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moth on face of moon
dawn arcs in mulberry leaves
cranes in buddha’s eye
2
quill’s soot ink trembles
snuff smokes night at candle’s end
kanji's laughing smile
3
arched door cedar wind
silk tatami serves heaven
rising tiger sun
*dedicated...*
("tatami" is a traditional Japanese sleeping mat.)
moth on face of moon
dawn arcs in mulberry leaves
cranes in buddha’s eye
2
quill’s soot ink trembles
snuff smokes night at candle’s end
kanji's laughing smile
3
arched door cedar wind
silk tatami serves heaven
rising tiger sun
*dedicated...*
("tatami" is a traditional Japanese sleeping mat.)
Published 14th Jun 2017
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14th Jun 2017 4:56pm
wow mister cat, just bloody wow.
you had me at the first line, its such a stirring image.
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you had me at the first line, its such a stirring image.
adored this
15th Jun 2017 2:49pm
I thank you, my dear shadoe, it started with a moth fluttering in the not quite dawn light in front of the mulberry tree by my house... hepcat
15th Jun 2017 2:50pm
15th Jun 2017 00:47am
15th Jun 2017 2:53pm
Thank you, my dear Oblivion... Your thoughts are always readily received and appreciated. geoff
