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Fuck You!
empty places
digging deep
for illusions
and grandeur
past humans
judge and snipe
afraid to compromise
their souls
i’ve earned
each praise
every insult
that i’m inferior
grown beyond
the terms
of any
contract
never sold
my presence
or creativity
for dollars
if so i’d
be a whore
lonely and
abandoned
fame robs
sacred hearts
steals
promises
don’t barter
talent
for fucking
suckers
simply say
two words
with drink
in hand
don’t need
approval
Fuck You!
Fuck You!
digging deep
for illusions
and grandeur
past humans
judge and snipe
afraid to compromise
their souls
i’ve earned
each praise
every insult
that i’m inferior
grown beyond
the terms
of any
contract
never sold
my presence
or creativity
for dollars
if so i’d
be a whore
lonely and
abandoned
fame robs
sacred hearts
steals
promises
don’t barter
talent
for fucking
suckers
simply say
two words
with drink
in hand
don’t need
approval
Fuck You!
Fuck You!
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Re. Fuck You!
10th Jun 2017 5:24am
That's right, fuck everyone's approval! Be your own person no matter what. Excellent ink here, my brother in steel.
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Re: Re. Fuck You!
10th Jun 2017 5:31am
Hades.. much appreciated my brother in steel.. exactly right, never sell your essence.. the thing that makes us whole.. we are strong, because we push forward.. Dave
Re: Re. Fuck You!
10th Jun 2017 2:29pm
Re. Fuck You!
10th Jun 2017 10:56am
damn right Dave we create for our own pleasure not for the glory or money..
can't buy our happiness we write because we must..
most excellent ink..
love you Dave..
xo Brenda
can't buy our happiness we write because we must..
most excellent ink..
love you Dave..
xo Brenda
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Re: Re. Fuck You!
10th Jun 2017 2:33pm
Brenda.. lovely one.. the truest vision, is the love of our art.. everything else falls short.. i appreciate your kindest words.. love you my sister.... Dave
Re. Fuck You!
10th Jun 2017 1:22pm
Off the charts! I so vibing with this Dave my hard rocking a ego!
Loves your brother
zoxoox Zazles
Loves your brother
zoxoox Zazles
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Re: Re. Fuck You!
10th Jun 2017 2:35pm
Lady Z.. off the charts we must wander, to understand the vibe... love you too... Dave
Re. Fuck You!
Anonymous
10th Jun 2017 9:46pm
good fucking lawd! imma give you my middles to add to yours
hell yes i am
hell yes i am
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Re. Fuck You!
10th Jun 2017 10:11pm
Splitsunsets.. truly honored by your comment.. i can use the extra middles... fuck those who judge.. love....
Dave
Dave
Re. Fuck You!
Anonymous
11th Jun 2017 3:49am
My brother...I have battled back and forth regarding my voice and my love of writing...and it was close...I almost said fuck it...ultimately I couldn't do it and I won't...I do it for the love of myself and my sanity and because I'm fucking free to do so...those who judge can be damned and I'm happy to be on this train with you! One helluva write! Love you!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Fuck You!
16th Jun 2017 1:27am
Lady Taryn.. my beautiful sister, so glad you decided to carry on.. you're one hell of a writer.. and the world is a much better place, because all of us write.. and you're a huge part of the team.. i love you, my sister.. Dave
Re. Fuck You!
12th Jun 2017 7:53pm
This lady's words and thoughts arent for sale. Stand tall and proud, DD. You are very talented. Fuck em. <3
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Re: Re. Fuck You!
16th Jun 2017 1:29am
Mysterious, right back at you sweetie.. you are very talented as well.. fuck em.. love.. Dave
Re. Fuck You!
Anonymous
14th Jun 2017 10:57pm
That`s a big
middle finger ... :)
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Re: Re. Fuck You!
16th Jun 2017 1:37am