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it is a dark pome sis crimsin that's how a see it. yo've written it darn well.. can take out many an interpretations from this and that's the beauty of it. awesome imagery a say.

thank you Walker you're right my mindset was real bleak when I wrote this.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts on this write.. any interpretation I love for the reader to take what they will from anything I write.. so happy this is one that can be done with.. love Crim

Ahhh! <3 c'est magnifique ! J'adore le poème.
What an amazing, touching ting to write.
I love the line here:
"I've found myself here. I'm not sure if I know my way back home."
I know the feeling of being lost all too well, but hey, if you keep walking in the samew direction long enough, you wind up rightr where you started, so change up your paths. Try new things. If you're lost, become a tourist.

thank you dearest Tryston for such a beautiful comment.. good advise I will keep walking seeking my way out.. in this land I don't plan on staying too long.. love Brenda

I love how there are so many angles to read this from, each one as fantastic as the next.

Seriously B this is a great write!!

All the best


Ben

thank you Ben I'm happy that many interpretations of this write can be found.. hopefully someone will take what away what they need from it.. love Brenda

Beautiful Angel, we must go for another walk through our forest, I think. Shade and cool air and breathy breezes to cool our fevered minds. As always, your words are potent and deeply felt. So much love...

thank you lovely one yes sigh the forest.. thank you for breathing fresh, cool air on my pages with your comment.. love you lady :) xo Crim

The entire piece was very good, powerful stuff but your ending stanza? That blew me away!!

thank you dearest Poe your comment put a smile on my face :) love Crim

rode a tornado far from Oz, Crim;
life is most often a desert
but there must be an oasis...

thank you John I'm currently looking for the shade of that oasis :) love Crim

Wow Crim........so painful to read this.......Ive have been here.......eventually I found a rainbow and life wasn't so bad........RL for me........sending you lots of purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you beautiful Flower i'm so happy you're no longer in a place like this yes it is a painful place to be.. I deeply appreciate the love you've shown me & this write.. love Crim

RL add for me . Written ike a multifaceted gem

thank you graciously dearest Ragnar.. I'm touched.. love Crim

As usual,  
Your words words are beautify layed out and come straight from the heart

Great ink

I love u crim,
You are an amazing writer

I love reading your poetry.

Keep your head up always ❤  

Sincerely,
Mike

thank you Mike I love your writes you have a lot of spirit & keep it real.. I deeply appreciate the love you've shown me & this write.. love Brenda

Brenda this poem gave me chills i too often wonder the same things.
but know this, the ones who love you , and there are many! are right next to you in fact I'm number 1692
loves you chic
always
Jackie xo

thank you beautiful Jackie aw lady happy to have your company but you to precious for a place such as this.. I cherish your thoughts & deeply appreciate the love you show me.. love you lady :) xo Brenda

fascinating future world poem - you are such a good story teller - grabbed my attention and kept it there despite the desolation :-)

sending 1000 ehugs :-)

thank you dearest David i'm happy you enjoyed this story.. yes would be good if not for the desolation part but unfortunately they go together.. love Brenda

A very bleak but powerful write, Crim.  It's a dystopian future in which numbers are worn, but as long as you're there some hope remains for other survivors.  Fine work from a lady warrior.

thank you Sir Crow I will be put to the test to see if i'm a true warrior or not in the badlands.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts.. love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda...even on the darkest day know that I will be there by your side...I would walk over broken glass and through fire to reach you when in your personal hell...over with, done with, gone...and we start a new day...together...and we'll snag Ash while doing so!

I love you passionately my love!

With all my love - Taryn xoxo

my love you've been there on so many dark days.. you see too much yes you know what this write is about I should have realized you would know.. thank you for journeying with me I couldn't get out of this place without you.. I love you madly.. xo Brenda

Transcending and earthy

New lands

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thank you dearest Poet.. love you.. xo Brenda