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In The Dead Of Night
come for me motherfucker
when my cunt is bloody
lick at the oozing wounds
crawl inside my soul
fuck it good
in the dead of night
nail me to the wall
pussy pounded
as forked cock digs deep
I am a lost one
feed the phene that is diseased
let me feel your insanity
peel back my skin
reveal my skull
let your demons fuck
my brain
as their cum seeps
through my eye sockets
bleed me dry
let all hope die
with a thousand cuts
as the devil slashes
with his switch blade tongue
lies from the pit
spew from my stitched lips
freed for the this moment
witness my true face come alive
come for me motherfucker
when my cunt is bloody
lick at the oozing wounds
crawl inside my soul
fuck it good
let me feel you this time
slick as sin
thick as blood
drink my wine
as I die a little more inside
bleed me dry
let all hope die
with a thousand cuts
as the devil slashes
with his switch blade tongue
*for Hades Comp.
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 7th Jun 2017
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Nothing better I always say.
Any Man who has all his wings is a man indeed !
Loved this
Seems we have a bloody theme going on lol
Loves you Sis
Zazzles xo
Any Man who has all his wings is a man indeed !
Loved this
Seems we have a bloody theme going on lol
Loves you Sis
Zazzles xo
7th Jun 2017 10:58am
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Anonymous
7th Jun 2017 11:25am
Brutal ! Vicious ! Awesome !
7th Jun 2017 11:46am
Anonymous
7th Jun 2017 1:54pm
so just date night plans huh? ltm
dark gods, i loved the viciousness, it seethes between the lines, forked cock & all.
i'm keeping this one
love ya stacks lady
xo
dark gods, i loved the viciousness, it seethes between the lines, forked cock & all.
i'm keeping this one
love ya stacks lady
xo
7th Jun 2017 2:12pm
thank you beautiful one you made my day with your comment & brought me giggles :) love you lady.. xo Brenda
7th Jun 2017 2:00pm
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7th Jun 2017 2:17pm
Always fascinating the way the absence of light or dark is tied to so much more.
8th Jun 2017 2:34pm
7th Jun 2017 3:33pm
Wow, that was brutal. I never saw that happen, but now I feel like I have. Geez lol.
Well, I will say this, it might need a spell check at some points, unless I'm just reading it wrong. Like at "forked cock" I think it's supposed to say "forced cock."
Well, I will say this, it might need a spell check at some points, unless I'm just reading it wrong. Like at "forked cock" I think it's supposed to say "forced cock."
7th Jun 2017 3:39pm
thank you dearest Tryston don't worry this is just a made up poem about the devil for a competition no you read right I meant forked cock.. love Brenda
Anonymous
7th Jun 2017 4:00pm
Holy buckets! That's some fierce writing, my lovely Angel! Way to grab the comp by the proverbial throat! Good luck! Much love...
8th Jun 2017 12:42pm
7th Jun 2017 7:17pm
Awe for fuck sake! (AFFS) - fierce / raw / bewildering - that was some write :-)
8th Jun 2017 12:43pm
thank you David lol at bewildering yes I suppose it is this was inspired by a death metal band called Carniflex.. love Brenda
Anonymous
8th Jun 2017 5:18am
My Beautiful Brenda...this was a pile driving write from line one to the closer...when you get into the zone you are IN and we need to get buckled up! Best of luck in the comp!!!
I love you deeply!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you deeply!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
8th Jun 2017 12:44pm
thank you my love for such a bad ass comment putting a wicked smile on my face :) I love you so deeply.. xo Brenda
29th Jun 2017 00:26am
It's morbid but also beautiful; I cannot stress this enough but words are what we make of them.
29th Jun 2017 1:32am
thank you most graciously for seeing the beauty in this dark scribe.. love Crim
