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A Terrible thing once tried
Objectifying Life
With a Language simplified
Strokes for different memories
Dynamics of Life
Illusion of Equation
Hidden figures
Mystic world
Spotlight, keeps it Glow
Chase all directions, To and Fro
Syncronized Collage of Time
Speaking of Love, Impulse and Life
Some silence, some smile, some cry
Tincture of Madness to know,
Shape of Water
Smell of Words
Song of Trail
In search of dimension that exists
Karma, a circle never Ends
What goes around, comes around
In Form, Life is Liquid in shape
No arguments, No more bet
Objectifying Life
With a Language simplified
Strokes for different memories
Dynamics of Life
Illusion of Equation
Hidden figures
Mystic world
Spotlight, keeps it Glow
Chase all directions, To and Fro
Syncronized Collage of Time
Speaking of Love, Impulse and Life
Some silence, some smile, some cry
Tincture of Madness to know,
Shape of Water
Smell of Words
Song of Trail
In search of dimension that exists
Karma, a circle never Ends
What goes around, comes around
In Form, Life is Liquid in shape
No arguments, No more bet
Published 5th Jun 2017
| Edited 6th Jun 2017
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5th Jun 2017 8:05am
Interesting to know that Life is liquid in shape. Like the philosophical thoughts in this piece.
Thanks for your appreciation. Indeed everyone's life is liquid when examined in depth. With maturity liquid form may get solidify.... but again it can change back to liquid, formlessness with time. Most of the people are reactive, they respond to the vibe they perceive before they solidify thus most of the time it's liquid.
5th Jun 2017 7:11pm
Very thought provioking! I like the subversion of normal descriptives and how they shape our perceptions.
6th Jun 2017 5:57pm
Have you ever read a very famous wise saying from 莊子( Drung Zi) who is an ancient Chinese philosopher? He once said that 大智若水(Great wisdom is like water), that is, water can be a dew on a flower petal, or like a running river flows at a great speed to the sea. It is sometimes as weak as a dew, but otherwise as stong as a river. It is just like our life.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I totally agree.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I totally agree.
6th Jun 2017 5:58pm
