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Earthen
in the journals you keep
your steps are marked
in its pages
*~*~*
your poetry is like the Earth
It undulates & shifts
breathes, it comes alive
*~*~*
it is the moss that grows
on the rocks that adorn
the mighty river
*~*~*
the great redwoods
lined with the story
of their journey
*~*~*
your poetry is like the ocean
is washes over me
wave after wave
*~*~*
brings new life
to my quiet shores
it feeds my weary soul
the nourishment it needs
*~*~*
you are like the Earth its self
rich with nutrient filled soil
where I can take root & grow
sprouting poetry of my own
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
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crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 4th Jun 2017
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Re. Earthen
4th Jun 2017 3:37pm
Your muse is a fountain of inspiration! Spread the seeds of poetry...
Wonderful write Crim!
JJ
Wonderful write Crim!
JJ
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4th Jun 2017 4:00pm
Re. Earthen
4th Jun 2017 5:14pm
Such an enchantingly beautiful poem, dear Crim
The picture and the *~*~* between the stanzas fits so perfectly!
Really enjoyed this one <3
Love, Duende
The picture and the *~*~* between the stanzas fits so perfectly!
Really enjoyed this one <3
Love, Duende
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Re: Re. Earthen
4th Jun 2017 7:12pm
Re. Earthen
4th Jun 2017 7:58pm
I thrive on your poetry Crim. I echo your lines:
brings new life
to my quiet shores
it feeds my weary soul
the nourishment it needs
Just the boost I need kind Lady. Thank you!
brings new life
to my quiet shores
it feeds my weary soul
the nourishment it needs
Just the boost I need kind Lady. Thank you!
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Re: Re. Earthen
7th Jun 2017 10:50am
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2017 9:26pm
My Beautiful Brenda, whoever is the inspiration of this write should be truly honored...you have vividly brought forth the most peaceful images and scents as I followed you close behind...absolutely stunning...
So much love for you my love!
With love always - Taryn xoxo
So much love for you my love!
With love always - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Earthen
7th Jun 2017 10:51am
thank you my love the inspiration for this write I would say is all the poets here like you that I love.. so happy to take you to a tranquil place with this write.. I love you.. love Brenda
Re. Earthen
5th Jun 2017 10:39am
lovely tributary picture sistah...no not the image but the poem itself. luv ya...write well.write awesome
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Re: Re. Earthen
7th Jun 2017 10:52am
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2017 1:55pm
Beautiful Angel, such beautiful imagery you've breathed into being here. Some people reach deep inside us with their words and wash away the ugly, bathing us in calm and peace. And the beautiful thing about it is they have no idea they're doing so...they're simply sharing from their hearts. Another lovely write, sweet one. Much love...
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Re: Re. Earthen
7th Jun 2017 10:54am
thank you lovely one you really reached into my heart with your comment I am so happy it had that affect on you.. when I wrote this I was seeking peace & meditated as I wrote.. writing this poem brought me calm as well.. love you lady.. xo Crim
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5th Jun 2017 3:47pm
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Re: Re. Earthen
7th Jun 2017 10:54am
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Anonymous
6th Jun 2017 12:46pm
brenda this is a wonderful write, the imagery is gorgeous, infectiously inspirational as tho it has sowed its seeds & we are simply fortunate enough to see them sprout & bloom.
adored this.
xo
adored this.
xo
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Re: Re. Earthen
7th Jun 2017 10:56am
thank you beautiful one I look forward to your comments.. I cherish them because you are one the poetess that inspired me this way.. love you lady.. xo Brenda
Re. Earthen
6th Jun 2017 4:25pm
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7th Jun 2017 10:56am
Re. Earthen
7th Jun 2017 5:24pm
your poetry is like the ocean
is washes over me
wave after wave
If I had written this; it would have been about you :-)
is washes over me
wave after wave
If I had written this; it would have been about you :-)
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8th Jun 2017 12:41pm