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Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
Fate has stopped an hour glass of tears
...Suspending grace
How could you ever let this go this far?
Void of...my soul, life, love, and heart
are echoing against the walls of emptiness
If all of who I am is less than what you wanted
you could've of said so
...then walked away
Yet you stayed...softly kissing luscious lips
making intimate love for hours
filling me with blessed hope
...sharing whispered dreams of
stars and sunshine
Midnight nightmares are all you left
while you go on living
…and I go on dying
Remember this when you are holding her~
Lily, you're strength and passion
shines in everything you do.
~ THANK YOU ~ for the gift of sharing ink with me......luv ya xo :)
...Suspending grace
How could you ever let this go this far?
Void of...my soul, life, love, and heart
are echoing against the walls of emptiness
If all of who I am is less than what you wanted
you could've of said so
...then walked away
Yet you stayed...softly kissing luscious lips
making intimate love for hours
filling me with blessed hope
...sharing whispered dreams of
stars and sunshine
Midnight nightmares are all you left
while you go on living
…and I go on dying
Remember this when you are holding her~
Lily, you're strength and passion
shines in everything you do.
~ THANK YOU ~ for the gift of sharing ink with me......luv ya xo :)
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Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
3rd Jun 2017 3:38pm
beautiful Flower & Lily as I said on Lily's post this beautiful even in heartbreak..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
5th Jun 2017 3:50am
Hey Crim......thank you for your luving support........glad you saw beauty thru the pain.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
3rd Jun 2017 4:40pm
Such a beautiful collaboration... I'm actually lost for words...
Your voices merge flawlessly in this write which is deeply felt...
Well done, you two!
Love and hugs, Duende
Your voices merge flawlessly in this write which is deeply felt...
Well done, you two!
Love and hugs, Duende
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Re: Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
Hey Duende.......awe my friend thank you for your uplifting words.......you've made us smile.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
3rd Jun 2017 4:42pm
Re: Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
6th Jun 2017 00:14am
Hey Ahavati........we are very happy you've enjoyed this.......thank you for your visit.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
3rd Jun 2017 7:42pm
a soft touch
of a gal touching another
in hopes of loving her
what would you call it
all purpled up
of a gal touching another
in hopes of loving her
what would you call it
all purpled up
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Re: Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
6th Jun 2017 00:17am
Hey Again.......only you can think sexy reading a sad write.......you're an original that's for sure.......we thank you much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
8th Aug 2017 7:48pm
you gave me more credit than i deserve in my opinion sex in life is pure existence and it's a must comes always every time first when in the vagina enters poppy's and moms bag burst we think of all that after sex first when will it happen and it does
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Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
3rd Jun 2017 7:42pm
Re: Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
6th Jun 2017 00:52am
Hey Whale.......we thank you for your upliftng words to us.......appreciate the support and visit.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
6th Jun 2017 00:57am
Hey Lily......you're so sweet.......luv sharing ink with you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
Anonymous
4th Jun 2017 8:53pm
Beautiful Sun Kissed, this write is sadly bound to touch the depths of many...beautifully and seamlessly done between the two of you...take a bow lovely ladies...
xoxo Sweet S
xoxo Sweet S
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Re: Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
6th Jun 2017 00:59am
Hey Sweet S........we thank you for taking time to visit our ink......luv writing with Lily.......appreciate very much your graceful words........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
4th Jun 2017 9:28pm
These are nuanced and graceful lines, ladies. Judging by the last two stanzas there are distinctly light and dark sensibilities at play here, and the contrast is very effective:
Yet you stayed...softly kissing luscious lips
making intimate love for hours
filling me with blessed hope
...sharing whispered dreams of
stars and sunshine
Midnight nightmares are all you left
while you go on living
…and I go on dying
You make beautiful poetry together and I hope you continue the collabs. Truly fine work.
Yet you stayed...softly kissing luscious lips
making intimate love for hours
filling me with blessed hope
...sharing whispered dreams of
stars and sunshine
Midnight nightmares are all you left
while you go on living
…and I go on dying
You make beautiful poetry together and I hope you continue the collabs. Truly fine work.
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Re: Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
6th Jun 2017 1:07am
Hey Crow.......we are honored by your review........thank you for such graceful support to us.......luv writing together........we are working on another right now........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
6th Jun 2017 12:11pm
Poetry in the motion of ripping wounds~An Elegance in Delivery~Two Very strong Hearts in this Ink~Lovely!!!
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Re: Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
7th Jun 2017 5:00pm
Awe Soul........thank you for heart warming words and for the visit upon our ink.......luv sharing ink with Lily........she's a blessing........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
7th Jun 2017 4:53pm
Midnight nightmares are all you left
while you go on living
…and I go on dying
Hit me right in the heart - sadly I identify with this last stanza - it's perfect :-(
while you go on living
…and I go on dying
Hit me right in the heart - sadly I identify with this last stanza - it's perfect :-(
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Re: Re. Suspending Grace ~ (Lily & Flowergirl)
7th Jun 2017 5:03pm
Awe David.......so sorry you can relate to such sad feelings........hope you find peace within your heart soon........thank you for the visit........purple luv & hugs xo :)