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Admit One
Admit one, was your mantra, then your actions
As you clearly were to demonstrate fun
You now hold the honor, you're my first one
I entered - sending into convulsions
For that is food for my weak self-esteem
My imperfections didn't faze you it seemed.
I didn't even need to have a ticket:
But you gave me that precious admission
You offered me your body, submission!
Didn't think you would, but yes you did it,
Now we will remain good allies for life
Because we saw each other in bare flesh,
When at our most human, vulnerable,
All because you said my body looked best,
You built me up when I though not possible
Now I'm a member just like all the rest,
Thanks to you I render myself capable
Admit one, and you said I was the best.
🎟👠💅👙💄 👓👔 🌡💋 💞🌡 💑💑💑💑🎟
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Blank Verse style poem and virginity and body image ....
And a man finally becoming one of 'them', one of the Human Race!
As you clearly were to demonstrate fun
You now hold the honor, you're my first one
I entered - sending into convulsions
For that is food for my weak self-esteem
My imperfections didn't faze you it seemed.
I didn't even need to have a ticket:
But you gave me that precious admission
You offered me your body, submission!
Didn't think you would, but yes you did it,
Now we will remain good allies for life
Because we saw each other in bare flesh,
When at our most human, vulnerable,
All because you said my body looked best,
You built me up when I though not possible
Now I'm a member just like all the rest,
Thanks to you I render myself capable
Admit one, and you said I was the best.
🎟👠💅👙💄 👓👔 🌡💋 💞🌡 💑💑💑💑🎟
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Blank Verse style poem and virginity and body image ....
And a man finally becoming one of 'them', one of the Human Race!
Published 31st May 2017
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