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You're Not Here
As I place a kiss
Upon your lips
I whisper
What you mean to me
As I gently
Caress your cheek
I remember
Why my knees go weak
As I silently
Gaze into your eyes
I see the future
A love without lies
I awaken and realize.....
It's all a dream
Upon your lips
I whisper
What you mean to me
As I gently
Caress your cheek
I remember
Why my knees go weak
As I silently
Gaze into your eyes
I see the future
A love without lies
I awaken and realize.....
It's all a dream
Published 28th Aug 2011
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Anonymous
29th Aug 2011 1:40am
Publishing material. ;-)
A suggestion would be to go easy on the caps. Limit them to a cap per sentence or structured thought to help with flow.
Great work once again!
A suggestion would be to go easy on the caps. Limit them to a cap per sentence or structured thought to help with flow.
Great work once again!
29th Aug 2011 2:02am
Hah....I know thats the problem with submitting from phone lol. But thanks hon ^_^
Anonymous
29th Aug 2011 1:59am
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