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Ins & Ins
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Transience
Brief be the journey
But the destination
inscriptions inscribed on our hearts
We don't forget.
Transience
Brief be the journey
But the destination
inscriptions inscribed on our hearts
We don't forget.
Published 23rd May 2017
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23rd May 2017 2:23pm
I love the powerful punch of brevity in this, and have read it three times.
It honestly reads better without inscribed.
Inscription inscribed is a bit trippy on the read, especially outload.
It honestly reads better without inscribed.
Inscription inscribed is a bit trippy on the read, especially outload.
23rd May 2017 2:30pm
Yes I see the way it could be seen trippy But I'll leave it as it is as testament of my wordy trippy write hehe
23rd May 2017 10:02pm
