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Ins & Ins
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Ins & Ins
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Transience
Brief be the journey
But the destination
inscriptions inscribed on our hearts
We don't forget.
Written by
Lookawaynow
(Rose)
Published
23rd May 2017
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Re. Ins & Ins
Ahavati
23rd May 2017 2:23pm
I love the powerful punch of brevity in this, and have read it three times.
It honestly reads better without inscribed.
Inscription inscribed is a bit trippy on the read, especially outload.
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Re: Re. Ins & Ins
Lookawaynow
(Rose)
23rd May 2017 2:30pm
Yes I see the way it could be seen trippy But I'll leave it as it is as testament of my wordy trippy write hehe
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Re: Re. Ins & Ins
Ahavati
- Edited 23rd May 2017 6:16pm
23rd May 2017 6:15pm
Like, Wow! :D
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Re. Ins & Ins
Lookawaynow
(Rose)
23rd May 2017 10:02pm
Yep even tripping on commenting hehe
Go me!
×D
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