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Loud Love

It's a black Saturday  
Here in this broken city  
It's the day  
I tried to live  
But there is nothing  
To light my way  
Bang, the sound of a gun  
Feels like suicide  
Is calling my name again  
Searching with my good eye closed  
In the dusty storm  
The black rain falls  
And I feel on black days  
But my original fire  
Outshined  
The black hole sun  
So show me your  
Jesus Christ pose  
And show me how to live  
In this rusty cage  
And loosen this pretty noose  
From around my neck  
So I live to rise  
Another day
LunaLove6963
Written by LunaLove6963
Published | Edited 27th Aug 2018
Author's Note
Winning poem in the Chris Cornell love tribute comp
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