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Comparisons

It was like rain, or was it snowó
it was cold is all I know,
 
with people on the street
walking, adrift like quiet smoke
 
while the tops of their umbrellas
scattered like crows
 
who also spoke not a word,
but I'll never know, for I never
 
heard, silent & empty, my
breath faint on a window pane.
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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