deepundergroundpoetry.com

Image for the poem Comparisons

Comparisons

It was like rain, or was it snow—
it was cold is all I know,
 
with people on the street
walking, adrift like quiet smoke
 
while the tops of their umbrellas
scattered like crows
 
who also spoke not a word,
but I'll never know, for I never
 
heard, silent & empty, my
breath faint on a window pane.
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
Published
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8 reading list entries 2
comments 18 reads 869
Commenting Preference: 
The author is looking for friendly feedback.

Latest Forum Discussions
SPEAKEASY
Today 7:32pm by Ahavati
SPEAKEASY
Today 7:31pm by Umm
SPEAKEASY
Today 7:27pm by Umm
SPEAKEASY
Today 7:23pm by Ahavati
SPEAKEASY
Today 6:41pm by RyanBlackborough
SPEAKEASY
Today 4:53pm by SweetKittyCat5