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Friendly vs. Honest Comments
For years I wanted honest
Until I didn't
Friendly seems good enough
It's a poem
Not an essay in the Times
It's better now
Honesty is overrated sometimes
Until I didn't
Friendly seems good enough
It's a poem
Not an essay in the Times
It's better now
Honesty is overrated sometimes
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Re. Friendly vs. Honest Comments
18th May 2017 3:27pm
It all depends on what'cha want, Poet. Preference is like taste ( or a woman ), it changes its mind! LOL!
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18th May 2017 11:42pm
Re. Friendly vs. Honest Comments
18th May 2017 5:53pm
this made me giggle Poet I thought I was going to reprimanded for not giving harsh critiques..
though feel free to lay it down hard on me I like it that way ;)
love Brenda
though feel free to lay it down hard on me I like it that way ;)
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Friendly vs. Honest Comments
18th May 2017 11:43pm
I did that once and you growled at me. There is an art to criticism that fosters itself in nuance ......
Re: Re. Friendly vs. Honest Comments
I did really I can't remember sounds like me though ask for something then get cranky when the ass paddling gets to rough ;) .. yes you are right there is an art to it :) love you dearest Poet.. love Brenda
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Re: Re. Friendly vs. Honest Comments
19th May 2017 00:29am
so much these days is lost in the rush. Nuance is such a beautiful thing Beautiful Brenda, you are ultra everything xoxo
Re. Friendly vs. Honest Comments
18th May 2017 7:32pm
i wouldn't say that honesty is overrated. i'd just say that there is a time and place for honesty. :)
i feel this, though. and i get it.
i feel this, though. and i get it.
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18th May 2017 11:44pm
Re. Friendly vs. Honest Comments
Anonymous
18th May 2017 9:16pm
I'm the first to admit I'm not up for the verbal beating that sometimes occurs in comments. Chick that I am, I stick with friendly and hope for a perfect blend.
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18th May 2017 11:45pm
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18th May 2017 10:11pm
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18th May 2017 11:45pm
Re. Friendly vs. Honest Comments
19th May 2017 5:59pm
sometimes it would be a refreshing change for somebody to read one of my poems and say "that was shit" - I wouldn't mind as long as the said why. I suppose it depends why we post. That dictates the type of comments we want in the main :-)
fascinating write :-)
fascinating write :-)
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Re. Friendly vs. Honest Comments
Anonymous
19th May 2017 6:49pm
Whether friendly or honest is requested, I follow the rule Thumper's Father said that morning...there is a way to express one's feelings respectfully, without being an asshole...enjoyed this Poe!
Disney like
- S
xo
Disney like
- S
xo
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Re. Friendly vs. Honest Comments
19th May 2017 11:25pm
better shut up and walk if ya can't say something honestly friendly. love the honest friendliness of this piece poet. loving ya work
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20th May 2017 1:17pm