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Promises
He held
all his promises
in a closed fist,
making her wish
he never
opened his hand
Written by
jemac
Published
17th May 2017
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JusTim_
18th May 2017 00:17am
Very deep piece JeJe
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jemac
19th May 2017 11:22pm
Thank you so much Tim for the read and thoughtful comments..always appreciated
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fire-fox
18th May 2017 2:37am
wow masterfully poem
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jemac
19th May 2017 11:23pm
Thank you so much fire-fox for the read and thoughtful comments..much appreciated
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David_Macleod
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19th May 2017 5:41pm
so much power and sadness in so few words - awesome :-)
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jemac
19th May 2017 11:24pm
Thank you so much David for the read and awesome comments ... For the add to your RL .. humbled and honored by the gesture
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