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When I was about 12
I once asked my mum
why people wear black
and the universe
showed me.
why people wear black
and the universe
showed me.
Written by
opheliac
Published 13th May 2017
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Re. When I was about 12
13th May 2017 9:15am
the color of mourning
has many names;
quickly she learns it & writes it...
has many names;
quickly she learns it & writes it...
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Re: Re. When I was about 12
13th May 2017 9:36am
Re. When I was about 12
Anonymous
13th May 2017 9:58am
Every now and then I'll read something that smacks me in the face. This was one of those times. That's a skill in so few lines. Wonderful.
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Re: Re. When I was about 12
15th May 2017 7:24pm
Re. When I was about 12
13th May 2017 12:04pm
lovely Opheliac I feel the sadness in this write..
deep ink dear soul..
love Crim
deep ink dear soul..
love Crim
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Re: Re. When I was about 12
15th May 2017 7:26pm
It wasn't a sad poem when i wrote it. It was more like an abrupt observation and realisation of my life. Kind of like a eureka moment.
Re. When I was about 12
13th May 2017 7:12pm
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15th May 2017 7:27pm
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15th May 2017 7:30pm
Re. When I was about 12
31st Jul 2017 10:35pm
you have been the longest on my poets list
I await a fresh one every now and then
but i also observe you don't list me
I shall bless your good wishes
AND
abandon
Take care you are the briefest best
of all we DUP'S rest
I await a fresh one every now and then
but i also observe you don't list me
I shall bless your good wishes
AND
abandon
Take care you are the briefest best
of all we DUP'S rest
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Re. When I was about 12
Re. When I was about 12
9th Aug 2017 11:28pm