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Re. Picking Bread off the Air
9th May 2017 2:14pm
Re: Re. Picking Bread off the Air
10th May 2017 2:22am
We hoist to heights our politicians, but as soon as they are set, we are forgotten...:) dustyjjewels, thank you for reading me.
Re. Picking Bread off the Air
9th May 2017 6:54pm
His ambitions were realized, but at whose cost? If he needed to use others as a footstool his position is ill earned. I almost think of a vampire in the third stanza, but he's more likely to be a human predator. Beautiful lines and art Grace, well laid out.
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Re: Re. Picking Bread off the Air
10th May 2017 2:23am
Predators...:) Crowfly, I like that. Thank you for reading me as always. Appreciated very much.
Re. Picking Bread off the Air
10th May 2017 2:29am
A smile of sparkling teeth. A footstool, now forgotten. Powerful imagery. Enjoyed this.
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Re: Re. Picking Bread off the Air
10th May 2017 5:39am
Re. Picking Bread off the Air
10th May 2017 6:03am
Unbelievable piece of poetry, Grace. Love the title, very interesting poem.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
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Re: Re. Picking Bread off the Air
10th May 2017 12:24pm