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In The Evening Swing
Nestled in the fibers of gods pocket
bathes the light
filtered by leaves
scattered patterns
of shapes and design
woven moments etch fragile as time
the whole structure sways while my mind drifts
picking up pieces i favor
tonguing toadstools
and I wander after wonder
to the strands of silver we share
if it is wrong to be in constant question
how to better myself
have i worn attributes
enough to be one with paradise
diamonds that sparkle forever
drape from the wrist
as I watch Pomors bird take on shape
the only dream worth having
I perch myself
in the hoops of reality
whispering golden secrets
gild each line from ruby throat
to obtain what is voiced
visions of swallows nest
feather over perfect skin
as the eyes of the maker
look to penetrate deeper
swimming hypnotize brown
No waste of heart-shaped vowels
flutter without aching passion
I am pinned to this world
and the nature that surrounds it
feeling the very moment
every paper plane, every box
that says where home is
and I want to fly
no longer without
but along the shoreline
with wind-swept deliverance
gifted as those
that dance nearby branches
bathes the light
filtered by leaves
scattered patterns
of shapes and design
woven moments etch fragile as time
the whole structure sways while my mind drifts
picking up pieces i favor
tonguing toadstools
and I wander after wonder
to the strands of silver we share
if it is wrong to be in constant question
how to better myself
have i worn attributes
enough to be one with paradise
diamonds that sparkle forever
drape from the wrist
as I watch Pomors bird take on shape
the only dream worth having
I perch myself
in the hoops of reality
whispering golden secrets
gild each line from ruby throat
to obtain what is voiced
visions of swallows nest
feather over perfect skin
as the eyes of the maker
look to penetrate deeper
swimming hypnotize brown
No waste of heart-shaped vowels
flutter without aching passion
I am pinned to this world
and the nature that surrounds it
feeling the very moment
every paper plane, every box
that says where home is
and I want to fly
no longer without
but along the shoreline
with wind-swept deliverance
gifted as those
that dance nearby branches
Published 9th May 2017
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9th May 2017 2:11am
a very sublime write dearest Soul it is like rays of sun on dappled leaves..
so beautiful..
love Brenda
so beautiful..
love Brenda
9th May 2017 3:03am
Thank You for stopping by Brenda, Light in the leaves-Yes Indeed!!! Greatly Appreciated!!!
9th May 2017 2:45am
What a wonderful and beautiful piece here. its totally wall worthy for the home! <3
9th May 2017 3:01am
Thank You for saying such a kind thing-Much Appreciated Myst.!!! You humble me with the RL-Very Kind!!!
9th May 2017 2:57am
i have currently aboot a bottle and a half of wine in me but righ now this poem seems pretty swell to me .. I am pinned to this world .. luv it homey
9th May 2017 3:00am
9th May 2017 3:29am
So beautiful.. reminded me of an old porch swing at my aunt and uncles home ... can still smell the sweet pine ... dappled Sun light .. yes ... so lovely , Thank you
10th May 2017 00:10am
Happy I could stir some memories Jemac!!! Thank You for the share-and Visit!!!
Anonymous
9th May 2017 8:28am
You're the quality of passionate circumstances,
How treasures are formed from letters to words to masterpieces
How treasures are formed from letters to words to masterpieces
10th May 2017 00:13am
What a compliment-Thank You Spilts and right back at Ya Kidd-O !!! Honoured by the visit!!!
9th May 2017 1:55pm
Love your cleansing nature poem. So nice to read a beautifully crafted layered piece of poetry.
10th May 2017 00:14am
You Honour me Tim-Greatly Appreciate the RL and Kind words-Cleansing-Indeed
9th May 2017 2:31pm
on a porch swing you can wander among these wonders
while traveling only a few inches back&forth;
I once sat on a porch swing with a girl named Barbara
long long years ago...
while traveling only a few inches back&forth;
I once sat on a porch swing with a girl named Barbara
long long years ago...
10th May 2017 00:17am
Glad I could bring a good memory to You John (at least I hope it was a good one) To feel at peace...does wonders for the Heart and mind.
9th May 2017 2:49pm
My Friend,your lovely lines create a very vivid, realistic moment for your readers!
In fact, this piece brings back special memories of my childhood summers, and a neighbor's tire swing.....with the last few rays of evening sunlight filtering through the leaves....how wanting someone to push harder, so with closed eyes,i, too, felt as if i was soaring, and flying as free as the birds....
This is a scribe of such natural, sublime beauty and serenity
In fact, this piece brings back special memories of my childhood summers, and a neighbor's tire swing.....with the last few rays of evening sunlight filtering through the leaves....how wanting someone to push harder, so with closed eyes,i, too, felt as if i was soaring, and flying as free as the birds....
This is a scribe of such natural, sublime beauty and serenity
10th May 2017 00:19am
Hey DE again I say, tis great to have inspired peaceful memories!!! Thank You for the visit and share!!!
9th May 2017 7:09pm
Gorgeous poem that captures what may be the impressions of an early summer's eve and transforms them into something visionary. And the porch swing might be the transport to dreams. But you are "pinned to this world," so you don't stray too far. Much to marvel at here!
10th May 2017 00:20am
Sir Crow-always looking betwixt the lines ;) Honoured by Your visit and thoughts Good Sir!!!
Anonymous
10th May 2017 5:44am
It's beautiful.
I love it!
I love it!
12th May 2017 1:47am
22nd May 2017 10:29pm
what's up soul!
Aw bro, I stayed on this piece, it's unique and relaxing
enjoyed this one here
Aw bro, I stayed on this piece, it's unique and relaxing
enjoyed this one here
6th Jun 2017 11:33am
HP Thank You for Your time and Kindness-Great to see You relaxing here!!!
Anonymous
17th Jul 2017 00:03am
Excellent write. M.
20th Jul 2017 12:41pm
Greatly appreciate the RL and Your time Good Sir!!! Digging into the oldies eh?
