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Dank and Chilly Spring
It rains everyday
You'd love it
Tea and cakes at that little cafe
Alone in the mist
Lovers
Washing our souls
Salvation babe
You'd love it
Tea and cakes at that little cafe
Alone in the mist
Lovers
Washing our souls
Salvation babe
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Re. Dank and Chilly Spring
Anonymous
7th May 2017 3:01pm
What a beautiful piece. You created such strong imagery and atmosphere. Not a tea girl but I love me some coffee. Sounds lovely
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7th May 2017 3:26pm
Re. Dank and Chilly Spring
7th May 2017 3:29pm
ahh Poet this poem washed over me in beautiful waves brightening my day :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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7th May 2017 4:34pm
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7th May 2017 9:49pm
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7th May 2017 10:06pm
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11th May 2017 2:00am
You're looking mighty beautiful Lena Takes two to tango at the Honky Tonk .... X
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11th May 2017 1:36pm
Thank you! Since we are neighbors and you see me, just stop me and say Hi or grab the cowboy hat and head to Honky Tonk lol
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12th May 2017 2:19am